Autumn Picture Show
5-7-5 contest entry62 total reviews
Comment from rama devi
i love that closing line - shifting gears in transition. Lovely artwork. Nice voicing. Congrats on placing in the contest! Very fine work, and nice alliteraiton of A & L and consonance of F, M & S plus the soft C in cinema
Sounds super read aloud!
Love,
rd
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2018
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i love that closing line - shifting gears in transition. Lovely artwork. Nice voicing. Congrats on placing in the contest! Very fine work, and nice alliteraiton of A & L and consonance of F, M & S plus the soft C in cinema
Sounds super read aloud!
Love,
rd
Comment Written 05-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2018
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Hi Rama, thank you my angel for a wonderful review...I love the picture...thank you for going back and reading my poem...love you girl...Linda xxoo
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Love love love and infinite smiles! :)
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Linda so glad I kept a few of my 6 stars
To give you for your cinema view of the beauty of a mother and children watching the last leaf tumble from a maple tree.
Gert
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
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Hello Linda so glad I kept a few of my 6 stars
To give you for your cinema view of the beauty of a mother and children watching the last leaf tumble from a maple tree.
Gert
Comment Written 23-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
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Hi Gert, thank you so much sweet lady for going back and reading my poem...I love this picture as well...the family look like they are looking at the cinema of Autumn...thank you for all your so lovely stars...and a wonderful review...God Bless...love Linda xxoo
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You are welcome Linda
Gert
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smiling big...xxoo love
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Good we all need to smile
Gert
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LOL...I know I do...xxoo
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We all must learn to at least give a little grin
Gert
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I would rather smile...but there are those days...LOL...xxoo
Comment from Asem.inspirations
Hey Raven: I know that I said that I would start from the back but this first poat caught my attention. I am loving the cinema of autumn show too, as the last leaf falls. If this is an example of your worst poetry then I can't wait to read to read the rest of it and lok at the # of reviews. Wow, you must be awesome. I will read more later.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
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Hey Raven: I know that I said that I would start from the back but this first poat caught my attention. I am loving the cinema of autumn show too, as the last leaf falls. If this is an example of your worst poetry then I can't wait to read to read the rest of it and lok at the # of reviews. Wow, you must be awesome. I will read more later.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
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Hi Tier, LOL...you make me smile sweet girl...thank you so much for a wonderful review...I am honored by your words...you have a wonderful time...smiling big...love ya Linda xxoo
Comment from LIJ Red
Looks like an excellent entry to a five/seven/five contest, to me, anyway. I missed the show this year. A hard rain fell one windy night and all the bright leaves came down at once.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
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Looks like an excellent entry to a five/seven/five contest, to me, anyway. I missed the show this year. A hard rain fell one windy night and all the bright leaves came down at once.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
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I am so sorry you missed the show...I love the leaves when they are falling...sigh...thank you so much for a great review...love Linda xxoo
Comment from rjuselius
This is a fine piece of poetry dear linda! I especially love the second line. I think it is rather clever.
Thanks for sharing!
Good luck!.
Blessings and a big squeeze!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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This is a fine piece of poetry dear linda! I especially love the second line. I think it is rather clever.
Thanks for sharing!
Good luck!.
Blessings and a big squeeze!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 21-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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HI Rebekka, thank you so much for a wonderful review my sweet friend...Blessing and a big squeeze to you as well...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Linda.
Your well chosen words + awesome graphic make a memorable poem. Good job on the syllable count. Your few words do tell a great concept of Autumn. It is amazing, does put on a show, & is watched by all. Autumn leaves are beautiful--up to & including when the last one falls. Best wishes in the contest. Jan
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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Linda.
Your well chosen words + awesome graphic make a memorable poem. Good job on the syllable count. Your few words do tell a great concept of Autumn. It is amazing, does put on a show, & is watched by all. Autumn leaves are beautiful--up to & including when the last one falls. Best wishes in the contest. Jan
Comment Written 20-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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HI Jan, thank you so much for wonderful review sweet girl...I am so glad you like it...I love the picture as well...and love the colors of Autumn...thank you...Love to ya Linda xxoo
Comment from Leineco
::::applause:::applause:::applause::::
This is truly a wonderful concept Raven..startled leaves
jumping with joy as the white-lettered credits start to roll
and panoramic fall exits stage left!
Totally enjoyed this :-)
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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::::applause:::applause:::applause::::
This is truly a wonderful concept Raven..startled leaves
jumping with joy as the white-lettered credits start to roll
and panoramic fall exits stage left!
Totally enjoyed this :-)
Comment Written 20-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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HI Leineco, so good to see you sweet girl...LOL...thank you for a wonderful review...I am so glad you enjoyed it...smiling back at you...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from kiwisteveh
Very clever graphic to go with the sweet words of the Autumn 5-7-5 Not only does it look like the family may be peering into a picture show, you even have the falling leaf - closer to our season than yours.
Nice phrasing in those first two lines and lovely alliteration in the last.
Steve
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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Very clever graphic to go with the sweet words of the Autumn 5-7-5 Not only does it look like the family may be peering into a picture show, you even have the falling leaf - closer to our season than yours.
Nice phrasing in those first two lines and lovely alliteration in the last.
Steve
Comment Written 20-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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Hi Steve, thank you so much for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
You got this just right! The content of your work goes superbly with the artwork that I love for this poem. It all was obviously well thought out, well written, and well done.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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You got this just right! The content of your work goes superbly with the artwork that I love for this poem. It all was obviously well thought out, well written, and well done.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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Hi Jeff, thank you so much for a wonderful review...a am so glad you like it...God Bless...Linda xxoo
Comment from mermaids
Autumn is certainly a show with all her beauty and colors. Your last line impacts the reader, that last leaf does remind us of the end of Autumn and the arrival of winter, yet the beauty of Autumn will return.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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Autumn is certainly a show with all her beauty and colors. Your last line impacts the reader, that last leaf does remind us of the end of Autumn and the arrival of winter, yet the beauty of Autumn will return.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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HI Elaine, it truly is a beautiful season my sweet friend...thank you for a great review...I am so glad you like it...love ya Linda xxoo
