Is Trump the Whole Problem
Not for Trump supporters11 total reviews
Comment from doggymad
I thoroughly enjoyed this work. I am at a total loss when it comes to following Trump's logic, if indeed there is any.
Either he will go down as the best president ever or he will be assassinated.
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Freda
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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I thoroughly enjoyed this work. I am at a total loss when it comes to following Trump's logic, if indeed there is any.
Either he will go down as the best president ever or he will be assassinated.
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Freda
Comment Written 17-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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We've had some bad presidents and I believe Trump is among the worst. I don't know about the assassination but I wouldn't be surprised. I think any leader of a country faces that possibility even if they are popular. I can't say I hope Trump is assassinated but I do really despise him. As for Trump's logic, I don't thing there is any. Thank you for reading.
Comment from Crystal Clarke
Wow! I find your poem quite entertaining! (I'm not from the US, by the way. I live in Canada). I think you are brave to write about politics and I enjoyed your honest opinions in the poem.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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Wow! I find your poem quite entertaining! (I'm not from the US, by the way. I live in Canada). I think you are brave to write about politics and I enjoyed your honest opinions in the poem.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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Thank you for reading. I've seen people from Canada commenting on our presidents a few times. Some actually seem to like him but most that I've seen don't. We are having a wild ride here. I appreciate the feedback.
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You are very welcome!
Comment from Joel Deniz Nazario
A fair assessment in verse of a controversial figure. I think the final line is a question, so not sure if you need to edit that with a question mark or if it is deliberate. It certainly got me thinking dark thoughts.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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A fair assessment in verse of a controversial figure. I think the final line is a question, so not sure if you need to edit that with a question mark or if it is deliberate. It certainly got me thinking dark thoughts.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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Thank you for your review. I don't usually use much punctuation in poems but maybe this needs some in places. I'll have a look. I've had dark thoughts ever since the last presidential election.
Comment from UntamedAngel
Dear Delahay,
I find this so true and it can be applied to the President of the country I live in too. As a note - I would recommend making use of punctuation for the tempo of the poem.
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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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Dear Delahay,
I find this so true and it can be applied to the President of the country I live in too. As a note - I would recommend making use of punctuation for the tempo of the poem.
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Comment Written 17-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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I don't usually use much punctuation in poems but I will take another look at this one. Thank you for your review and feedback.
Comment from trumby
As an Aussie, I must say that Trump amuses me. I think that he's the most controversial leader that you've had for quite a while.
On his good side though, I must say that I like his stand on Muslims and terrorism.
I hope that he's a good leader.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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As an Aussie, I must say that Trump amuses me. I think that he's the most controversial leader that you've had for quite a while.
On his good side though, I must say that I like his stand on Muslims and terrorism.
I hope that he's a good leader.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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I wish we had a president who could speak in complete sentences and could keep track of his lies. He caters to the most base emotions to stir people up and divides the country when he does so. It could be amusing if it weren't so disturbing. Thank you for reading and for your review.
Comment from Dean Kuch
You're absolutely right, Delahay, President Trump is not the entire problem. The problem is our nation's people; a populace who was so easily duped and manipulated into voting for such an egotistical megalomaniac.
I am proud to say that I'm not one of those who voted for Trump. Quite frankly, I can't stand the guy.
I've always been very proud of our country and her people. But now...
Good poem, thank you for sharing.
~Dean
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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You're absolutely right, Delahay, President Trump is not the entire problem. The problem is our nation's people; a populace who was so easily duped and manipulated into voting for such an egotistical megalomaniac.
I am proud to say that I'm not one of those who voted for Trump. Quite frankly, I can't stand the guy.
I've always been very proud of our country and her people. But now...
Good poem, thank you for sharing.
~Dean
Comment Written 17-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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I didn't vote for him either. I can't stand him. What I can't understand is that he showed everyone what he was before they voted and they still wanted him. Now we are all stuck with the results. I can't even listen to him talk. He can't even speak in complete sentences and can't keep his lies straight from one sentence to the next.
Thank you for reading and for the feedback.
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My pleasure.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Agreed. I have totally quit watching news and politics--it just gets me too upset.
No one seems to know what's true (how very true. Well written commentary, my friend~DEbbie
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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Agreed. I have totally quit watching news and politics--it just gets me too upset.
No one seems to know what's true (how very true. Well written commentary, my friend~DEbbie
Comment Written 17-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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I have to take days off and stay away from the whole mess at times. I never paid too much attention to politics before now and I wish I could ignore them more. Thank you for your feedback.
Comment from tfawcus
A splendidly cynical view of politics! We don't know the half of what is going on and politicians are adept at keeping it that way. Not sure who the GOP are, not being familiar with American politics, but I seem to have heard of that guy, Trump!
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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A splendidly cynical view of politics! We don't know the half of what is going on and politicians are adept at keeping it that way. Not sure who the GOP are, not being familiar with American politics, but I seem to have heard of that guy, Trump!
Comment Written 17-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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Thank you for reading my poem. I appreciate the feedback. GOP stands for Grand Old Part and is another name for the Republican party in the US. It is the party currently in power here. I don't trust politicians much anyway but the current crop seems worse than usual.
Comment from Dawn Munro
Here, here, well said, and I support every in-your-face word you have penned. It's bold and courageous, and as a Canadian, I'm glad to stand with every American who sees the truth of Donald Trump's presidency. I hope you publish this!
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018
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Here, here, well said, and I support every in-your-face word you have penned. It's bold and courageous, and as a Canadian, I'm glad to stand with every American who sees the truth of Donald Trump's presidency. I hope you publish this!
Comment Written 16-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018
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Thank you very much. I wish you would read the review by Ricky1024. He didn't like something else I wrote about Trump once before and has a strange way of reviewing that makes little sense. No only by writing in one long, run-on sentence but using words and phrases that are somewhat odd.
I appreciate your kind review and feedback and thank you for the support form our friends to the north.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
Well said.
You have written a poem with a good and clear message.
It's amazing that a man who's country mocks him daily stays in place, and alive.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
Sharon
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018
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Well said.
You have written a poem with a good and clear message.
It's amazing that a man who's country mocks him daily stays in place, and alive.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
Sharon
Comment Written 16-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018
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I was just thinking how much I would hate to be one of the Secret Service agents whose job it is to protect that man with their lives. I wonder if they can ask for other assignments. Thank you so much for your kind review.
