Painful Memories
unforgotten77 total reviews
Comment from godlucifer
pain comes and go. memories last a lifetime. when we endear the pain we also endear the good ones. sometime its better just to let the pain endear the good ones so we can move on with our life. your poem was strong in such few words. thanks for the read. "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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pain comes and go. memories last a lifetime. when we endear the pain we also endear the good ones. sometime its better just to let the pain endear the good ones so we can move on with our life. your poem was strong in such few words. thanks for the read. "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
Comment Written 17-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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Hi Godlucifer, I will just be glad when it is all behind me...and the good is all that is remembered...it is true...when it rains...it does pour...thank you for a great review...Love Linda xxoo
Comment from ameen786
Hello Linda, my friend this short and meaningful verse should resonate with lots of poets on this site; I know I can relate to it, for it is that burning that brings out the best of verses; the picture is perfect for the poem.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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Hello Linda, my friend this short and meaningful verse should resonate with lots of poets on this site; I know I can relate to it, for it is that burning that brings out the best of verses; the picture is perfect for the poem.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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Hi Kamran, so good to see you my sweet friend...it just seems when it rains it pours....they say God doesn't give us my then we can handle...I think He needs to hold back a bit with me....LOL...at least for a few months...but I do see a light at the end of the tunnel...it's just a long way down that tunnel...LOL...thank you for a great review...Love Linda xxoo
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I shall pray for you my friend; whatever it is, may God make it easy for you.
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thank you so much Kamran...I will always except prayers...and He does...how are you doing??? well I hope...love xxoo
Comment from Zue65
I like short poems packed with message like this one. The photo is perfect for your poem for reinforced the point you wanted to drive home to the readers. thanks for sharing this excellent piece. All the best.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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I like short poems packed with message like this one. The photo is perfect for your poem for reinforced the point you wanted to drive home to the readers. thanks for sharing this excellent piece. All the best.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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HI Susan, thank you so much for a great review my friend...I am so glad you like it...I love the picture...and you are so very welcome...all the best to you as well...love Linda xxoo
Comment from jenintorre
I really like your flash fiction poem and the wonderful art work that you have chosen.
It portrays such a strong message in so few words. Well done.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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I really like your flash fiction poem and the wonderful art work that you have chosen.
It portrays such a strong message in so few words. Well done.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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Hi Jenintorre, thank you so much for a great review...so glad you like it...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello!
A finely constructed 5/7/5 poem. The message is true for many memories, and I am certain that many can relate said message. I was expecting "minds" as opposed to "hearts." "Hearts" resonate with deep pain, indeed.
Best wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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Hello!
A finely constructed 5/7/5 poem. The message is true for many memories, and I am certain that many can relate said message. I was expecting "minds" as opposed to "hearts." "Hearts" resonate with deep pain, indeed.
Best wishes!
diane
Comment Written 17-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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Hi Diane, I had written it with "minds"...but changed it to hearts because that is where it hurts so bad...it seems to leave such an aching in our hearts...thank you for a great review...and best wishes to you as well...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Connie C
Yes, I agree with your poem that it is sometimes difficult to put painful memories out of our minds. Your poem is an excellent reminder of this and something that many of us need to try to change (myself included).
What a great image you chose to accompany your message.
Thank you for sharing.
Connie
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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Yes, I agree with your poem that it is sometimes difficult to put painful memories out of our minds. Your poem is an excellent reminder of this and something that many of us need to try to change (myself included).
What a great image you chose to accompany your message.
Thank you for sharing.
Connie
Comment Written 17-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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HI Connie, so good to see you my sweet friend...I can tell you...when it rains it pours...I just want the painful memories to turn to good ones...but some of them truly do need to remain....for they were made out of goodness...thank you for a wonderful review...Love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from MelB
Hi Linda, oh, so true! Especially when it is so fresh in your mind. I'm so sorry dear friend. Sending you a big hug! If you need to talk, just call.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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Hi Linda, oh, so true! Especially when it is so fresh in your mind. I'm so sorry dear friend. Sending you a big hug! If you need to talk, just call.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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HI Melissa, thank you for a wonderful review my sweet friend...and allll your lovely stars...I will...it's true that when it rains it pours...I think I am getting passed one thing...and another pops up...if God doesn't give us more than we can handle...He needs to slow down on me right now...sigh...you are such a wonderful friend...thank you...Love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from Janet Foor
painful memories
never to be forgotten
burn within our hearts
This is definitely a truism. You are so right, sometimes those painful memories overwhelm us and seem to block out all the good things. I'm going through one of those instances at this time.
Thank you for sharing and I hope you have a great day.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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painful memories
never to be forgotten
burn within our hearts
This is definitely a truism. You are so right, sometimes those painful memories overwhelm us and seem to block out all the good things. I'm going through one of those instances at this time.
Thank you for sharing and I hope you have a great day.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 17-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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Hi Janet, they say God doesn't give us more than we can take...but I am running on overkill right now...I know there is a light at the end of the tunnel...but I wish it would just get here...I am so sorry you are going through painful times as well...please take care...just knowing God is walking me through this helps...thank you for a great review...and you are so welcome...and you have a great evening...Blessing to you as well...love Linda xxoo
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Knowing God is with us everyday helps but during stressful times, it truly is my salvation. So happy that we share this common thread. You have a great evening too Linda.
Hugs
Janet
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so am I my friend...wish more did...sigh...smiling...xxoo love
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
w, Linda, I know what you mean, and they do for a while. The pain you get from those memories will stop and turn into memories that will put a smile on your face, it just takes a bit of time. Big hugs, and so much love, my dear friend. xxx Sandra xx
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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w, Linda, I know what you mean, and they do for a while. The pain you get from those memories will stop and turn into memories that will put a smile on your face, it just takes a bit of time. Big hugs, and so much love, my dear friend. xxx Sandra xx
Comment Written 17-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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Hi Sandra, all I can say my sweeterest friend...is when it rains it pours...and I am having a thunder storm right now...I know there will be a time I will see a light at the end of this painful tunnel...anytime would be great...thank you for your wonderful review you...ya know I love you this high...I'm pointing to the Heavens...bigger hugs back at ya my sweet friend...Hi To Ian...xxoo
Comment from Joel Deniz Nazario
An a honest, succinct and powerful message. I would like to know more.. perhaps that adds intrigue to it, in which case the form is very suitable.
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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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An a honest, succinct and powerful message. I would like to know more.. perhaps that adds intrigue to it, in which case the form is very suitable.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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you need to read the laws of reviewing on FanStory...you don't low star with no reason...and the reason why there is a written problem...such as spelling, etc...not personal...
and this review makes no sense...the poem states there are painful memories in our hearts that burn(hurt,stab) forever...never to be forgotten...and that's the message in the poem...any other good poet knows...you do ask for personal life stories...that is no ones business unless the writer puts it in there...PLEASE go read the laws...you hurt people raking like that...love Linda xxoo thank you
