Painful Memories
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Comment from jusylee72
Burn within our hearts. Great description of the pain that tattoos our emotions directly in our heart. Loved the picture and the moving air. It brings motion to the words. Enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
Burn within our hearts. Great description of the pain that tattoos our emotions directly in our heart. Loved the picture and the moving air. It brings motion to the words. Enjoyed it.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
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Hi Jusylee, thank you so very much for a great review...so glad you like it...love Linda xxoo
Comment from damommy
Your poem is so true, but we must learn to let go the sad and the bad. It only serves to hurt the one hanging on to the bad memories.
Very nice presentation that goes along with your words.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
Your poem is so true, but we must learn to let go the sad and the bad. It only serves to hurt the one hanging on to the bad memories.
Very nice presentation that goes along with your words.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
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Hi Yvonne, thank you for a great review sweet girl...it just seems like some sometimes...when it rains it pours...thank you...love you...Linda xxoo
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It certainly does.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is such a true poem. I like the wording, the content, the message. The artwork compliments the message you conveyed superbly. Very well written and very well done.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
This is such a true poem. I like the wording, the content, the message. The artwork compliments the message you conveyed superbly. Very well written and very well done.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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Hi Jeff, thank you so very much for a great review...many have related to it...love Linda xxoo
Comment from zanya
A universal truth stated categorically here in this succinct and terse format of three lined poem with some effective use of verbs 'burn' and a very effective pic
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
A universal truth stated categorically here in this succinct and terse format of three lined poem with some effective use of verbs 'burn' and a very effective pic
Comment Written 17-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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HI Zanya, thank you so very much for a great review...God Bless...love Linda xxoo
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a sad lament, but one with which we live and often suppress with the years, beautifully expressed in this succinct and fluid verse - fully compliant with the form...Eve
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
In my opinion, a sad lament, but one with which we live and often suppress with the years, beautifully expressed in this succinct and fluid verse - fully compliant with the form...Eve
Comment Written 17-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
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Hi Eve, thank you so much for a great review...so glad you like it sweet girl...love Linda xxoo
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You are very welcome indeed, Linda...Eve
Comment from poetsteve15
So much said with so few words and a picture. i don't usually give six stars on this type poetry but this is really good.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
So much said with so few words and a picture. i don't usually give six stars on this type poetry but this is really good.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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HI Steve, WOW!!! I am truly honored for all your wonderful stars...and a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...love Linda xxoo
Comment from johnwilson
This is a lovely complete presentation. I was taken in by the art and you showed me something I had not thought about with your words--that the memories of a painful even BURN and cause more pain...lovely
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
This is a lovely complete presentation. I was taken in by the art and you showed me something I had not thought about with your words--that the memories of a painful even BURN and cause more pain...lovely
Comment Written 17-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
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Hi John, yes they do...they burn a scar on your heart...sigh...thank you for a wonderful review...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
jWow yes and it does not have to be of love or loss, it could be betrayal or pain. This covers all and why did you not enter it in the 5-7-5 contest? It is great
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
jWow yes and it does not have to be of love or loss, it could be betrayal or pain. This covers all and why did you not enter it in the 5-7-5 contest? It is great
Comment Written 17-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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HI Barb, I started to...and let the time go by...hmmmmm....thank you so much for a awesome review my sweet friend...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from royowen
I'm thankful that painful memories are behind me. Even though I've lost some friends, they are in good hands, but I now what you are tackling about, those unreconcilable differences, missed opportunities, a beautifully written 5/7/5, my support Linda, good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
I'm thankful that painful memories are behind me. Even though I've lost some friends, they are in good hands, but I now what you are tackling about, those unreconcilable differences, missed opportunities, a beautifully written 5/7/5, my support Linda, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 17-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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HI Roy, thank you so much my sweet friend for a wonderful review...I will be grateful when the painful ones are gone...and the good memories are all that is left...I stay close to God...and it does help...I know He is by my side...blessings to you as well Roy...love Linda xxoo
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Chin up girl, remember those hills!
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I do Roy...I'm going to go purchase some mountain boots...LOL...thank you so much...xxoo
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Good hiking Linda
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thank you...LOL...xxoo
Comment from doggymad
A wonderfully penned short work. I admire the fact that you have included a very pertinent issue in this poem.
Indeed it is interesting that the bad seems to overshadow the good at times
hugs
Freda
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
A wonderfully penned short work. I admire the fact that you have included a very pertinent issue in this poem.
Indeed it is interesting that the bad seems to overshadow the good at times
hugs
Freda
Comment Written 17-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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HI Freda, yes it does...and it is so true...when it rains it pours...thank you my sweet friend for a great review...love Linda xxoo