Summer Dolls
When evil plays with deception.....35 total reviews
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
This is a very well written 5-7-5, my friend. What an interesting picture this is and I agree expresses your point, very well~Debbie
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018
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This is a very well written 5-7-5, my friend. What an interesting picture this is and I agree expresses your point, very well~Debbie
Comment Written 23-Jan-2018
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Thanks for the very perceptive and generous review. Thanks for the five stars too. God bless.
Comment from kleck140
Short and to the point. I had reason to collect dolls
and I wrote an essay about that. Therefore the title
was enticing, and the poem a delight to read.
Thanks for sharing. EL
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Short and to the point. I had reason to collect dolls
and I wrote an essay about that. Therefore the title
was enticing, and the poem a delight to read.
Thanks for sharing. EL
Comment Written 22-Jan-2018
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Thanks a lot kleck140 for resonating with the message of the poem and thanks a lot for the generous stars. god bless.
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You are very welcome.
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Your Welcome!
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You are Welcome. EL
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You are welcome.
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You are welcome. Sorry I am so late in a response. My work as a tax accountant is demanding from Jan to April.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello Nassus, this is a subtle and well written 5/7/5 written true to form. You were to find such an appropriate picture. I wish you well in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
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Hello Nassus, this is a subtle and well written 5/7/5 written true to form. You were to find such an appropriate picture. I wish you well in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 22-Jan-2018
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Thanks a lot Dorothy for stopping by and considering this a well written piece. Thanks too, for the generous stars.
Comment from Gulbahar Sidhu
I have always felt that writing a small poem is far more difficult. You deserve accolades for attempting to write in this difficult format and yet come out with flying colors. Congratulations and all the best.
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I have always felt that writing a small poem is far more difficult. You deserve accolades for attempting to write in this difficult format and yet come out with flying colors. Congratulations and all the best.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2018
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Thanks a lot for the very generous review. I appreciate it a lot, thanks too, for the five stars.
Comment from Ogden
Interestingly imagined, your poem delivers what you see in the illustration. I say that because I believe I see it, too.
An excellent poem, not for the impatient speed-reader.
Don (aka Ogden)
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Interestingly imagined, your poem delivers what you see in the illustration. I say that because I believe I see it, too.
An excellent poem, not for the impatient speed-reader.
Don (aka Ogden)
Comment Written 21-Jan-2018
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Thanks a lot for considering this an excellent piece. I am deeply humbled.
Comment from mvbrooks
The image on the moon seems muted images of a doll trying to imitate a child. The poem sets and eerie mood and a sense of longing and loss for the neglected dolls.
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The image on the moon seems muted images of a doll trying to imitate a child. The poem sets and eerie mood and a sense of longing and loss for the neglected dolls.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2018
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Thanks for stopping by and thanks for the perceptive review. Thanks too, for the excellent stars.
Comment from trumby
Nice 5-7-5 poem. Made me stop and think - is this about child abuse? Their innocence stolen. Anyway, the image and the poem is a perfect match. Keep sharing.
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Nice 5-7-5 poem. Made me stop and think - is this about child abuse? Their innocence stolen. Anyway, the image and the poem is a perfect match. Keep sharing.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2018
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Yes, this is about child abuse, the stolen children sold for cheap sex, deceived by their kidnappers. Thanks too, for the generous stars.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Summer Dolls", is short, succinct and very much to the point. This poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING.
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"Summer Dolls", is short, succinct and very much to the point. This poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2018
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Thanks a lot for the very generous review . Thanks a bunch for the five stars.
Comment from Gloria ....
I very much enjoy the subtle meaning of your fiveseventyfive, Nassau. The opening line defines the sense of unreality when abuse is present, and that the secrets that are kept are like dolls under a veiled moon. It is atmospheric in its imagery.
Very nicely written,
Gloria
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I very much enjoy the subtle meaning of your fiveseventyfive, Nassau. The opening line defines the sense of unreality when abuse is present, and that the secrets that are kept are like dolls under a veiled moon. It is atmospheric in its imagery.
Very nicely written,
Gloria
Comment Written 21-Jan-2018
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Thanks for the intelligent review and thanks for the five stars too. I do appreciate it a lot.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello nassus1957
Stolen dolls good way of describing a child that has been stolen that are being adducted and used for cheap sex . The pix of the dark moon gave me an eerie chill
Gert
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Hello nassus1957
Stolen dolls good way of describing a child that has been stolen that are being adducted and used for cheap sex . The pix of the dark moon gave me an eerie chill
Gert
Comment Written 21-Jan-2018
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You got the interpretation right, my friend. Thanks for stopping by and thanks again for the generous five stars. Susan
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You are so welcome nassus
Gert
