Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hi there;
Thank you for sharing your Monday morning muse. I think you did a good job of describing the mournful closet as it watches clothes leave for the workday - no more weekend quiet. Well done,

~patty~

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018

Thanks Patty for considering this piece well done. thanks for warm stars too. All the best. susan (nassus)

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written poem about every day things that can become a boring routine that we start to dread after a long period. We have to blow steam off, now and then.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018

Thanks a lot Sandra for appreciating this little piece, and thanks again for the generous stars. God bless. Susan

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

Nicely written and nicely said.
You have taken so few words to get your message across, this is not an easy thing to do.
Thank you for sharing this lovely poem with us.
Sharon

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018

Thanks a lot Sharon for considering this piece a lovely poem. Thanks again for the warm stars. Thanks a bunch. Susan

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

This free style poem simply rocks the house, Susan.
Most of my Mondays are blue.
In fact, most every day is blue come to thing about it.
Yeah, those mundane observations so many make about so many but themselves.
Such is human nature.
~Dean

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018

Thanks again my friend for the warm review. You put a smile on my face. Thanks too, for the generous stars. God bless. Susan

Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

When you are in the work force, Monday presents challenge. Mostly personal. When retired there is always something to do to cut the moments. Take a walk. LOL.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018

Yeah, I do take a walk with my daughter's dog nowadays. I am a retired college teacher at present, primarily the reason why I can review more work in this site. Anyway, thanks again for the generous stars. Susan (nassus)

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I used to hate Monday mornings and would do anything to avoid them and Tuesday was always welcome. Your free-write is brought it all back to me, the middle stanza is my favourite, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 16-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018

Thanks a lot Dolly for reviewing and appreciating my work. Yes, Mondays can be a sad way to start work. Thanks a bunch. all the best. Susan