Monday Blues
We all engage in routine musings....26 total reviews
Comment from James H. Oldfield
I could have sworn I left a review of this, yesterday. Sorry, I must have shut down without saving it.
Excellent, anyway, as I believe was the general gist :)
Great work, and take care.
-James
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
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I could have sworn I left a review of this, yesterday. Sorry, I must have shut down without saving it.
Excellent, anyway, as I believe was the general gist :)
Great work, and take care.
-James
Comment Written 18-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
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Thanks for considering this piece a great work, thanks too, for the generous five stars. God bless.
Comment from Ogden
I think we all can relate to unbidden, mindless musings, and some even lead to poetry (see 'Monday Blues').
Very nice work, Nassus.
Don (aka Ogden)
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018
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I think we all can relate to unbidden, mindless musings, and some even lead to poetry (see 'Monday Blues').
Very nice work, Nassus.
Don (aka Ogden)
Comment Written 18-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018
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Thanks a lot for the perceptive review and the generous stars too.
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
For me it has nothing to do with a certain day of the week that brings me down. Sometimes it's working with certain people that bring me down. I think we all have those co workers that we know will be at work on certain days that just suddenly drain everything out of us. However, tomorrow she is off. Yay, me! Great job
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018
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For me it has nothing to do with a certain day of the week that brings me down. Sometimes it's working with certain people that bring me down. I think we all have those co workers that we know will be at work on certain days that just suddenly drain everything out of us. However, tomorrow she is off. Yay, me! Great job
Comment Written 17-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018
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Thanks a lot for stopping by and thanks for the generous stars, too.
Comment from johnwilson
I really enjoyed your musings, as you say. Each word was a poetic tool left up to the reader to interpret. On the second stanza, shouldn't it read, " the hooked hanger witnesses"? Otherwise, this rocked!
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018
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I really enjoyed your musings, as you say. Each word was a poetic tool left up to the reader to interpret. On the second stanza, shouldn't it read, " the hooked hanger witnesses"? Otherwise, this rocked!
Comment Written 17-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018
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Thanks a lot for the perceptive review, the slip was corrected accordingly. God bless.
Comment from Deniz22
I think I get this one...no, I'm sure I do. Good capturing of mood and excellent word choice. Forgive me if you find this offensive but it's (to me) a little reminiscent of Kris Kristofferson's "Sunday Morning Coming Down."
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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I think I get this one...no, I'm sure I do. Good capturing of mood and excellent word choice. Forgive me if you find this offensive but it's (to me) a little reminiscent of Kris Kristofferson's "Sunday Morning Coming Down."
Comment Written 17-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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Oh my God, thank you for the six stars, you really made my day. God bless and again thank you from the bottom of my heart. Susan
Comment from ameen786
Not another mannic Monday but a profound write my friend; you captured the essence of a poet's uneasiness with his/her surroundings who struggle to give meaning to it and you certainly did.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018
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Not another mannic Monday but a profound write my friend; you captured the essence of a poet's uneasiness with his/her surroundings who struggle to give meaning to it and you certainly did.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018
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Thanks a lot for appreciating this short poem and thanks too, for the generous five stars.
Comment from Crystal Clarke
This is a lovely, truthful poem about the Monday blahs! I know what that feels like; trudging through a routine Monday morning, making it through the day in a half-zombie state. Thankfully, the rest of my week is usually much better :) Great job!
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018
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This is a lovely, truthful poem about the Monday blahs! I know what that feels like; trudging through a routine Monday morning, making it through the day in a half-zombie state. Thankfully, the rest of my week is usually much better :) Great job!
Comment Written 17-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018
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Thanks a lot for resonating with the message of the poem and thanks for the generous stars too.
Comment from misscookie
I have no more stares to give I felt you wrote this poem for me
The devil has been in my body and mind since April 2017 because Jesus is my rock he could not touch my soul
it's been like that since New years, I will try to write about it as soon as I can gather so member ship money
it is call the invasion of the B's
Take care Cookie
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018
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I have no more stares to give I felt you wrote this poem for me
The devil has been in my body and mind since April 2017 because Jesus is my rock he could not touch my soul
it's been like that since New years, I will try to write about it as soon as I can gather so member ship money
it is call the invasion of the B's
Take care Cookie
Comment Written 17-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018
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Thanks a lot misscookie for the heartwarming review and thanks too, for the generous stars. God bless.
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It was my pleasure.
Peace God be with you and yours
Cookie
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It was my pleasure.
Cookie
Comment from jusylee72
You do a very descriptive free poem. I had to read it more than once to try to understand it and there is nothing wrong with that. The imagery is very picture brain effective. Not sure the correlation with the office but it does paint a picture.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018
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You do a very descriptive free poem. I had to read it more than once to try to understand it and there is nothing wrong with that. The imagery is very picture brain effective. Not sure the correlation with the office but it does paint a picture.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018
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Thanks for appreciating the merits of this poem and thanks too, for the generous five stars. God bless.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This was a very good description of a Monday. I can visualize the long faces and clothes being thrust from hangers. Thank you for sharing this. Well written and well done.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
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This was a very good description of a Monday. I can visualize the long faces and clothes being thrust from hangers. Thank you for sharing this. Well written and well done.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
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Thanks a lot for considering this well done and well written. thanks for the generous stars too.
