Hope.
An Emotion Poem17 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
HI Cass, hope is truly all of these things...hope holding on when nothing seems to make sense...I love your poem sweet angel...so very beautiful...and very nicely written my sweet friend...sigh...love you girl...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018
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HI Cass, hope is truly all of these things...hope holding on when nothing seems to make sense...I love your poem sweet angel...so very beautiful...and very nicely written my sweet friend...sigh...love you girl...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 04-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018
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Dear Linda, thank you for your review and the five stars . How are things with you these days, my dear? Are you taking care of yourselves and each other? The weather should start to abate fairly soon so you can look forward to sunny days and new flowers pushing through the cold earth as it warms into Spring. We ae still suffering the heat of Summer with all the birds clustering around the bird bath for cool drinks in the shade of the leafy Apricot tree. Take care of yourself little friend, and present my compliments to your dear Mother. Luvyaheaps cheers Cass
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HI Cass, mom was doing well for a short time...but now she wants to go be with my dad...she has no will to live...and cries a lot...but everyone stays close to her...63 years was a long time...you are always soooo welcome my sweet angel...I am doing well...thank you...and I hope you are well as well...LOL...love you lotsssssss...Linda xxoo
Comment from jenintorre
I really enjoyed reading your lovely poem about hope. It has very good rhyme and rhythm and portrays a beautiful message. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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I really enjoyed reading your lovely poem about hope. It has very good rhyme and rhythm and portrays a beautiful message. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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Dear Friend, thank you for your review and the five stars. I am glad you like it and am delighted with your generous comments cheers Cass
Comment from James H. Oldfield
A beautiful poem, very well done indeed.
The first line in the final stanza would be my favourite, a lovely expression.
Great job, nothing at all to fault.
Take care.
-James
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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A beautiful poem, very well done indeed.
The first line in the final stanza would be my favourite, a lovely expression.
Great job, nothing at all to fault.
Take care.
-James
Comment Written 01-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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Dear James, thank you for your review and the five stars. This came out all of a hurry, so I scribbled it down and spent the next days editing and re-editing.. the result is satisfactory and rather pleasing. Thanks for your kind remarks cheers Cass
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem of an emotion, Hope, presented in three, ABCB stanzas, takes the reader to a definition, example, and metaphor for a state of expectation of a promise being fulfilled. Hope is sometimes all that matters.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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This poem of an emotion, Hope, presented in three, ABCB stanzas, takes the reader to a definition, example, and metaphor for a state of expectation of a promise being fulfilled. Hope is sometimes all that matters.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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Dear Bill, thank you for your review and the five stars. Yes, sometimes Hope is all we have and sometimes it is all we need. cheers Cass
Comment from Boogienights
This is a lovely poem about a wonderful emotion. We all need to have hope in our lives, for our families,ourselves and our future, because without hope what do we have to hold on to? Hope allows us to dream. You do a great job in expressing what hope is all about. I wish you good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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This is a lovely poem about a wonderful emotion. We all need to have hope in our lives, for our families,ourselves and our future, because without hope what do we have to hold on to? Hope allows us to dream. You do a great job in expressing what hope is all about. I wish you good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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Dear Friend, thank you for your review and the five stars. I was going to enter this in the contest, but when I looked for it in the listing, I couldn't find it. So I thought , Oh well never mind I'll just stick it in my portfolio and see what happens. Goodness me. Fourteen reviews and counting. Who needs contests? cheers Cass
Comment from artisart4u
It is nice how you used hope with the
senses- taste, smell, (sound) hearing, touch and sight. Feeling is the sixth.
It says that emotion is your seventh sense.
Found under Enlightened Feeling.
I would say you did a very good job in writing this poem and it rhymes well.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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It is nice how you used hope with the
senses- taste, smell, (sound) hearing, touch and sight. Feeling is the sixth.
It says that emotion is your seventh sense.
Found under Enlightened Feeling.
I would say you did a very good job in writing this poem and it rhymes well.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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Dear Friend, Thank you for your review and the five stars. It won't be going into a contest, but thanks anyway. Cheers Cass
Comment from Joy Graham
Cass,
This is so lovely that I had to give you my last six star rating. I love the gentle feeling and all the ways hope hangs out there. I'm having issues with cabin fever because of our deep freeze winter weather and that it's always so dark and gloomy. Your poem shot me with a dose of energy that should get me through a few more days. Nice rhymes add that special touch.
Joy xx
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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Cass,
This is so lovely that I had to give you my last six star rating. I love the gentle feeling and all the ways hope hangs out there. I'm having issues with cabin fever because of our deep freeze winter weather and that it's always so dark and gloomy. Your poem shot me with a dose of energy that should get me through a few more days. Nice rhymes add that special touch.
Joy xx
Comment Written 01-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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Dear Joy, Thank you for your review and the awesome SIX stars. I know about "cabin fever" but not at present as we're part way through our Summer and I'm enjoying the warmth in my arthritic carcass. We have a wet, cold winter though, and I do get twitchy and irritable being cooped up inside and can't get out the door fast enough at the first opportunity.
Comment from Ben Colder
Well said. Hope is also the mother of faith. Something man can never live without. I find nothing wrong with this write. I hope you well in the contest if it is entered. My blessings
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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Well said. Hope is also the mother of faith. Something man can never live without. I find nothing wrong with this write. I hope you well in the contest if it is entered. My blessings
Comment Written 01-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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Dear Ben, thank you for your review and the five stars. Yes, Hope is the gleam of light showing through the darkest clouds . I am glad you like it as your opinion matters to me. cheers Cass
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about hope. It is the only thing that we cannot go without. When there is no hope everything is hopeless. We can find hope in the simplest things around us in our daily lives.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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A very well-written poem about hope. It is the only thing that we cannot go without. When there is no hope everything is hopeless. We can find hope in the simplest things around us in our daily lives.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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Dear Sandra, Thank you for your review and the five stars. Yes, you speak truly. We cannot live without Hope. and it can make itself known in such simple ways. Thanks again cheers Cass
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good submission for the 'Emotion Poetry' writing prompt.
Well written and a clear message. This is a good piece.
Well done and thank you for sharing this lovely piece with us.
Sharon
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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I think this is a good submission for the 'Emotion Poetry' writing prompt.
Well written and a clear message. This is a good piece.
Well done and thank you for sharing this lovely piece with us.
Sharon
Comment Written 01-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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Dear Sharon, Thank you for your review and the five stars. It is a pleasure to share one's work with those who have the same thoughts and ideas. It won't be a contest entry though . I decided to go in for prose entries instead of Verse. Thank you for your kind comments cheers Cass
