Comment from GLOBALEYES

Excellent

Very nicely done. Enchantment is a great word for a newborn because all are taken in who witness this miracle of life and experience these emotions. Good luck in the contest. Betty Davis

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2018

Thank you for your great review and comments. I appreciate your time in reviewing it.

Comment from Writingfundimension

Excellent

What a lovely, heart-warming poem. Your imagery conveys a sense of peace and harmony to this reader. I'm glad I stopped by to read and review. Well done!

Bev

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018

Thanks so much for the good review. I appreciate it!

reply by Writingfundimension on 17-Jan-2018

You're welcome.

Comment from Thor R

Excellent

The picture with the poem was well chosen. You invoked all the senses with your words which is a feat in such a small poem. Would love to read more poems like this.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018

Thanks so much!

Comment from Margaret Snowdon

Excellent

This is the best I've read so far - you've the right
idea - how you've listed just what enchantment is -
works well - a good entry for the contest. Good luck.

and I just love the picture - so adorable.

Margaret

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018

Thank you so much for the good review. Babies are enchanting!!

Comment from RodG

Excellent

Any parent and grandparent understands the "enchantment" of a newborn baby. This Speaker describes SPECIFICALLY what causes it for her--all the sensory pleasures.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018

Thank you for the good review. I appreciate it!!

Comment from James H. Oldfield

Excellent

Excellent, surely a strong contender for the contest.

Lovely words and, crucially for the for, emotions. Helped, of course, by a great photo.

Good luck.

Take care.

-James

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018

Thank you so much!!

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is so beautiful and I agree with every word, babies give so much without even realising it, new life has such wonderful prospects and your poem is full of enchantment, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018

Thank you Dolly!! I appreciate the good review.

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

A nice poem on enchantment, mother gets and hopes for varied and more in the tomorrows with the growing baby, well said, well done; thanks for sharing this, good luck with the contest. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018

Thanks so much for the good review.

Comment from MaryAnnie

Average

I like how the author incorporates all five senses into the poem: smell, taste, sound, touch/feel, and sight/looking forward.

To improve this, I might suggest trading the phrase "bundle of joy" with a phrase less common and more personal - more whimsical or enchanting.

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018

Thanks so much for the good review.

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the Epigram Poetry writing prompt.
Well said, well written, and the picture is adorable.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018

Thank you Sharon.