Comment from Natali Holden

Excellent

Sorry I got a little behind on your book. This is just terrible. They finally get a location and then she's taken away. It seems as if by the time they reach there, she'll be gone for sure. Who knows where they're going now. Dr. Crane is so evil. Hopefully they can find her soon. Keep up the good work!
Natali ;)

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018

Thank you, Natali :)
You're spoiling me, but I love it! One thing I will tell you about my story. There is always a good ending, and I never truly kill off my beloved characters. I can't stand it when I read a series and the author kills off one of my favorite characters. I'm the type that writes a happy ending.
Thanks again and it's great to hear from you.
Shana :)

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I'm so glad Eve decided to betray Sebastion and help the covenant to locate and rescue Tessa and Tidus, although that might not be possible with the further kidnapping of Tessa, to take her to Dr. Crane. So wouldn't Lilith want to inflict revenge on Crane, Shana? A really excellent episode, sorry about the lateness, the mad rush for ratings is causing an avalanche of posts my friend, (don't know why, it's who finishes, not who begins) beautifully scribed. Blessings, Roy
Typo : It was as if she was trying (to) relay a message.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018

Thank you, Roy! :)
Yes, Eve's dark heart has definitely made a change. But not soon enough I'm afraid. Poor Tessa. Hopefully the Covenant will find out where Dr. Crane's men has taken her. Don't worry about trying to rush with me. I'm so blessed to have you as a bright shining inspiration. Thanks for catching the missing word. Opps!
Always your fan,
Shana :)

reply by royowen on 16-Jan-2018

Always my pleasure dear girl

Comment from ngage

Excellent

Thank goodness Eve is helping Tessa, but not so sure it will do her any good now that Thomas has sent her away.
I did enjoy reading about Mia and Jem's reaction to Arius's homecoming. Very heartfelt. The emotions created seem real and believable. Great job!

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018

Thank you, ngage! :)
So stoked you liked the chapter and the emotions with Arius's homecoming. Mia and Jem are beginning to love him and his brother as their own children. Hope to hear from you again!
Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from apky

Exceptional

I'm speechless with awe, darling. You have such a widely fanned out cast of characters, and it reels my mind to imagine how hard it would be (for me at least) to keep them all in mind and characteristics. You're pure genius in this.

Brilliant, as always!

who walked out of them(the) room

You are always terrific with doing summaries of previous chapters that I envy you this. I'm hopeless with résumés.

She stopped to steady herself and breathed away the rising nausea(nauseous) feeling, churning inside her stomach.

It was (as) if she was trying (to) relay a message without words.

Just a question to clear my confusion here: Is Arius Eve's son (Arius and Tidus twins) or is the child mia's? Or are there two children, both named Arius?

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018

Thank you so much! You're such a wonderful help! :)

Yes, I do have a lot of characters, but it's not hard for me to keep up with them. They seem so real to me, just like a family. BTW... my son rolls his eyes when I say that. He says, "Mom... you're crazy, but in a good way." LOL!
Arius and Tidus are Sebastian and Eve's twin sons. Mia is Eve's twin sister. She has taken on the responsibility of raising the boys along with her bonded mate Jem since Eve is supposed to be facing punishment for her crimes against the Breedline in the previous books. But since Sebastian has swooped in and saved Eve from the Breedline, things have took a turn.

Thanks again! You're awesome!
Your fan,
Shana :)

reply by apky on 17-Jan-2018

Thanks for letting me know, darling. Also for telling me about your son. Sounds like a very loving soul. But with a mother like you, it's no wonder. Now I understand how you can describe the actions and looks of children so well!

Ever fondly,
Aki

reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018

You're welcome my dear friend, and thank you! :)

Comment from Harry Smith

Excellent

After reading this I want to read more so I will be following this to see how things turn out. I will need to read more so that I can completely understand.

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018

Thank you, Harry! :)
So glad to have a new reader. I enjoy getting feedback and hope to hear from you again! Stay tuned... more Breedline adventures to come.
Sincerely,
Shana :)