So...so the Lights are Low
oh that feeling48 total reviews
Comment from Mrs. KT
Your offering is filled with sensual, rhythmical, delightful imagery. Each line progresses to the next. Additionally, your offering lends itself to be read aloud because of the musical nature within each line. A fine offering... diane
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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Your offering is filled with sensual, rhythmical, delightful imagery. Each line progresses to the next. Additionally, your offering lends itself to be read aloud because of the musical nature within each line. A fine offering... diane
Comment Written 15-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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Thank you, Diane. A lovely review.
Comment from Brigitte Elko
This is a commendable piece of poetry. It brought emotions to the mind of this reader, love and beauty.
The wording tells a wonderful and picturesque story. It was clever a manipulation of words that unveiled this poetic beauty. Well written, my friend. Loved it.
Blessings
:)Brigitte
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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This is a commendable piece of poetry. It brought emotions to the mind of this reader, love and beauty.
The wording tells a wonderful and picturesque story. It was clever a manipulation of words that unveiled this poetic beauty. Well written, my friend. Loved it.
Blessings
:)Brigitte
Comment Written 15-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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As did I your review. Thank you.
Comment from robina1978
Is this photo taken somewhere in the South of England? It complements your poem very well. It sounds great as well. I like swans and the lights. Love is also involved. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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Is this photo taken somewhere in the South of England? It complements your poem very well. It sounds great as well. I like swans and the lights. Love is also involved. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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I picked the picture from our sister site. Perhaps its location is mentioned there. Don't know. But thank you.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This poem is warm and smooth. That's a good thing. I could feel the scene that was set in the words. I appreciate you sharing this poem with us. Thank you.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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This poem is warm and smooth. That's a good thing. I could feel the scene that was set in the words. I appreciate you sharing this poem with us. Thank you.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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Thank you, Barbara.
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
An old locket
in my pocket
gonna fill with snow
Lay the brush
in the locket
and paint our brand new glow ...
I LOVED this Victor, such clever rhymes, so interesting, I enjoyed it thoroughly well done love and best wishes Meia x
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
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An old locket
in my pocket
gonna fill with snow
Lay the brush
in the locket
and paint our brand new glow ...
I LOVED this Victor, such clever rhymes, so interesting, I enjoyed it thoroughly well done love and best wishes Meia x
Comment Written 15-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
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Smile. Thank you.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written heartfelt poem. It seems the poet was inspired by the artwork here the lights Appear to be low. Cupid is around and we take the opportunity to declare our love.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018
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A very well-written heartfelt poem. It seems the poet was inspired by the artwork here the lights Appear to be low. Cupid is around and we take the opportunity to declare our love.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018
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Hi dear, and thank you.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Very nice writing, Doug.
This is the voodoo that you do so well.
A wistful word weaver, a hopeless romantic. A wry wordsmith whose woven words weaken the ladies' knees--hopefully only those of your lady love. To the point of...well...you know.
Heh, no, you can't fool me, buddy. At least not based on what I've just read.
Rock on.
~Dean
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018
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Very nice writing, Doug.
This is the voodoo that you do so well.
A wistful word weaver, a hopeless romantic. A wry wordsmith whose woven words weaken the ladies' knees--hopefully only those of your lady love. To the point of...well...you know.
Heh, no, you can't fool me, buddy. At least not based on what I've just read.
Rock on.
~Dean
Comment Written 15-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018
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That was a pretty nice review man a the night. I'll...jus leave with the lights so low. :)
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Like Motel 6...
...we'll leave the light on for ya.
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You are the most interesting evil man I've never met.
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You haven't met very many evil men then, have you, Doug?
Heh-heh-heh.
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Well, I've met more than I wanted to. :) First job, dentist at maximum security prison. Yup. Ahem. Please read, (I do realize ur time constraints), (but I DO think this is worth it)- "The Walk."
It is a ways back in my portfolio. About my first hour, at Pontiac Penitentury. Short story. I hope U can sleep at night after it. Ha ha ha.
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Oh, I'll bet that was a fun job, Doug.
"Is it safe? Is...it...safe?" ~ Marathon Man, Dustin Hoffman, 1976.
~Dean
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I will NEVER forget Marathon Man. What a movie. I was still in dental school. Ccouldn't turn my head when I came out of theater. Neck too stiff from terror of teeth. Oh my God.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Everything looks better in dim lighting. I have dated some girls that made me jump when I saw them in the daylight. Bars and restaurants keep the lights low for this reason.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018
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Everything looks better in dim lighting. I have dated some girls that made me jump when I saw them in the daylight. Bars and restaurants keep the lights low for this reason.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018
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Ha ha. Yes, I'm sure it's so. Your sense of humor always has me jumping. lol
Comment from Gloria ....
Well Victor it appears you still have the touch. What an amazing picture of mauve. I really like it especially given the swans diving and swimming.
A lovely romantic feel to this modern poem.
I dig it.
Gloria
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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Well Victor it appears you still have the touch. What an amazing picture of mauve. I really like it especially given the swans diving and swimming.
A lovely romantic feel to this modern poem.
I dig it.
Gloria
Comment Written 14-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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That was a really big genuine smile you just put on my face. Thank you.
Comment from kiwigirl2821
hello Victor. It is so nice to see you working again at your craft! I think the woman who inspired this will be quite pleased that you feel as you do and should be excited as well lol. I love the sing song rhythm and "the lights on low" speaks to me of mystery and an ongoing romance. Nice work here Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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hello Victor. It is so nice to see you working again at your craft! I think the woman who inspired this will be quite pleased that you feel as you do and should be excited as well lol. I love the sing song rhythm and "the lights on low" speaks to me of mystery and an ongoing romance. Nice work here Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 14-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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Thanks. I might need it with her. lol
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indeed! I think just show her your Chicago skyline and she'll swoon lolololololol course you might need a heavy coat. It should be snowing is it not? great work xx d
