So...so the Lights are Low
oh that feeling48 total reviews
Comment from mvbrooks
The picture proves a strong pairing with the poem as the swans swin in the glow of the low lights in the background. Lovely use of repetition and the words set a warm mood
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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The picture proves a strong pairing with the poem as the swans swin in the glow of the low lights in the background. Lovely use of repetition and the words set a warm mood
Comment Written 15-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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Thank you.
Comment from krys123
Is there a SEVEN in the house...!
-Cheers Victor;
-I always considered myself a poetical lyricist but this is the best poem that really describes a poetical lyricist than anything else.
-The tempo of this poem radiates I've been writing lyrics for over 55 years and over 40 songs recorded and published. Two songs made the top one hundred in 1984. So when I read something like this I want to put my hooks into it. Or least learn the style that's written so beautifully.
-It moves with feeling both Impressionistically simple and definitively and expressively complicated or complex. The complex is the way it's moves.
-The repetitive words and some of the verses help show the feeling more than anything.
-The historical reference of the environment is beautifully written and described in expressed in ways that really set the mood.
-The pictures beautiful and adds to the poem both suggestively and really. And it is very supportive and relative to the conceptual theme.
-Is the way you ended the shows the personal aspects of the human desire of a romantic situation.
-Thanks for sharing, Victor, and take care and have a good one.
Alex
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
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Is there a SEVEN in the house...!
-Cheers Victor;
-I always considered myself a poetical lyricist but this is the best poem that really describes a poetical lyricist than anything else.
-The tempo of this poem radiates I've been writing lyrics for over 55 years and over 40 songs recorded and published. Two songs made the top one hundred in 1984. So when I read something like this I want to put my hooks into it. Or least learn the style that's written so beautifully.
-It moves with feeling both Impressionistically simple and definitively and expressively complicated or complex. The complex is the way it's moves.
-The repetitive words and some of the verses help show the feeling more than anything.
-The historical reference of the environment is beautifully written and described in expressed in ways that really set the mood.
-The pictures beautiful and adds to the poem both suggestively and really. And it is very supportive and relative to the conceptual theme.
-Is the way you ended the shows the personal aspects of the human desire of a romantic situation.
-Thanks for sharing, Victor, and take care and have a good one.
Alex
Comment Written 15-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
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That was, naturally, a quite wonderful review to receive. I sincerely thank you.
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You're very welcome, Victor.
Alex
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
This was very musical, Victor, it had such rhythm that made it so nice to read. The imagery jumps delightfully, the tilt of the moon, the locket filled with snow, and many more to make this a very good poem to read. Well done. Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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This was very musical, Victor, it had such rhythm that made it so nice to read. The imagery jumps delightfully, the tilt of the moon, the locket filled with snow, and many more to make this a very good poem to read. Well done. Sandra xxx
Comment Written 15-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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Easy on me Sandra, you're being charming again. Smile. Thank you.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is an ambient write with the lights low and quite passionate and romantic too, loved your words and someone is a lucky lady, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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This is an ambient write with the lights low and quite passionate and romantic too, loved your words and someone is a lucky lady, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 15-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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Smile. Thank you.
Comment from estory
I liked the repetitions, the rhythm of this piece, it read very much like lyrics set to music. It has a definite pattern, a definite musical rhythm. some of the images popped too..."An old locket in my pocket I'm gonna fill with snow" "The tilted moon" make this scene seem magical. estory
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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I liked the repetitions, the rhythm of this piece, it read very much like lyrics set to music. It has a definite pattern, a definite musical rhythm. some of the images popped too..."An old locket in my pocket I'm gonna fill with snow" "The tilted moon" make this scene seem magical. estory
Comment Written 15-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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Naturally, I love reviews like this. Thank you.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"So...so the Lights are Low", is an extremely well-written and semi-erotic piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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"So...so the Lights are Low", is an extremely well-written and semi-erotic piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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I am too. lol Thank you, dear.
Comment from Sugarray77
Excellent!! Good job! Such a heartfelt and lovely poem that moves us all.
The selection of the photograph was a good choice and nicely compliments your verse.
Well done.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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Excellent!! Good job! Such a heartfelt and lovely poem that moves us all.
The selection of the photograph was a good choice and nicely compliments your verse.
Well done.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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Bowing-thank you.
Comment from robyn corum
Victor,
I never, ever know what I will find when I open one of your posts. *smile* And I like that. This felt a bit more like a bluesy old song than a poem to me. I fell myself kinda swaying to the rhythm of it. It kinda got lost in the middle somewhere but came sliding back in the end. Sweet! Thanks!
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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Victor,
I never, ever know what I will find when I open one of your posts. *smile* And I like that. This felt a bit more like a bluesy old song than a poem to me. I fell myself kinda swaying to the rhythm of it. It kinda got lost in the middle somewhere but came sliding back in the end. Sweet! Thanks!
Comment Written 15-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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Swaying, huh? I'd say the concept worked. lol Thank you.
Comment from Janet Foor
Amazing picture and presentation to this beautiful rhyme and lyrical piece. Full of sensual feelings and lovely imagery.
Very nicely done Victor.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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Amazing picture and presentation to this beautiful rhyme and lyrical piece. Full of sensual feelings and lovely imagery.
Very nicely done Victor.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 15-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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Why...thank you.
Comment from Jesse James Doty
A wonderful sentimental poem, with an excellent presentation. The photo is lovely, and the lavender background is, too. I like the repetitive lines in the piece. It sets up a gentle, caring feel to it. The title is superb and lets us know, what to expect with the poem. Very nice and well written. Thanks for sharing your sentimental side.
Take care, Jesse
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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A wonderful sentimental poem, with an excellent presentation. The photo is lovely, and the lavender background is, too. I like the repetitive lines in the piece. It sets up a gentle, caring feel to it. The title is superb and lets us know, what to expect with the poem. Very nice and well written. Thanks for sharing your sentimental side.
Take care, Jesse
Comment Written 15-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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Really, a quite pleasing review. Thank you.
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You're welcome.
