So...so the Lights are Low
oh that feeling48 total reviews
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
A lot of things can happen when the lights are on low. Even if the lights are low you still have to play the game and paint the right picture. A dim lit room means nothing with the wrong painter.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
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A lot of things can happen when the lights are on low. Even if the lights are low you still have to play the game and paint the right picture. A dim lit room means nothing with the wrong painter.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
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I would have to say-this is true. Thank you.
Comment from Ricky1024
Sarasota later love was well-written rich and team as well as imagery flowed well read well and no grammar issues as well I checked an object account is from rough sex on friendly places put two measures line perfectly thanks for just talked to Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
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Sarasota later love was well-written rich and team as well as imagery flowed well read well and no grammar issues as well I checked an object account is from rough sex on friendly places put two measures line perfectly thanks for just talked to Ricky 1024
Comment Written 17-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
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Thank you.
Comment from jusylee72
I love the first few stanzas where you play with repetition. It kept my mind engaged and wanting to continue. That luscious feeling of being with someone you desire when the lights are down low and you so want to know every part of them. Beautifully written.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
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I love the first few stanzas where you play with repetition. It kept my mind engaged and wanting to continue. That luscious feeling of being with someone you desire when the lights are down low and you so want to know every part of them. Beautifully written.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
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I'd say U got it right. lol Thank you.
Comment from Twinsissy
I've read your poem several times, Victor, trying to capture the essence/meaning of what you are saying. I can't. Maybe that's the point? Poetic license?
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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
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I've read your poem several times, Victor, trying to capture the essence/meaning of what you are saying. I can't. Maybe that's the point? Poetic license?
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Comment Written 17-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
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Thank you for reading.
Comment from johnwilson
This is a pure delight to read, using all the alliteration, rhyme and free verse at the same time! If I had a six left, it would be yours! The ending was pure-perfection. Ah...
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
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This is a pure delight to read, using all the alliteration, rhyme and free verse at the same time! If I had a six left, it would be yours! The ending was pure-perfection. Ah...
Comment Written 17-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
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Thank you, John. Always a delight when U stop by.
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Hi I get the feeling someone is changing his or her feeling and you are trying very hard to convince . A great outpouring of good and sincere feelings written in a very special way.
Danny Jock
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
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Hi I get the feeling someone is changing his or her feeling and you are trying very hard to convince . A great outpouring of good and sincere feelings written in a very special way.
Danny Jock
Comment Written 17-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
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Thank you, sir.
Comment from Gulbahar Sidhu
Hi there
I read, re-read and re-read your poem to get the real feel of it. I could visualize the low lights and the gentle flow of your poem. What a great talent to have!
Congratulations.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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Hi there
I read, re-read and re-read your poem to get the real feel of it. I could visualize the low lights and the gentle flow of your poem. What a great talent to have!
Congratulations.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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A very pleasant moment coming upon ur review. Thank you.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
This is a wonderful free verse with rhyme. It flows together so very well and is truly a joy to read tonight. A delightful poem to review, my friend~debbie
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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This is a wonderful free verse with rhyme. It flows together so very well and is truly a joy to read tonight. A delightful poem to review, my friend~debbie
Comment Written 17-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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A delightful review to read also, my friend. Thank you.
Comment from c_lucas
I will soon be marketing a book. "I'm not the lover I use to be." We old farts have to stick together. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read. I would like to keep the lights down low, but I forgot where the switch is.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018
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I will soon be marketing a book. "I'm not the lover I use to be." We old farts have to stick together. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read. I would like to keep the lights down low, but I forgot where the switch is.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018
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Ha ha ha. That is the longest review I have ever received from you. Jesus, you make me smile sometimes Charlie. Thanks so much, and hang in there. Doug
Comment from RGstar
Doug, I am giving this a six star...and I am doing it for what it is. No, not teeming with poetic devices or elaborate rhyme schemes.
It spoke to me as a lyrical piece. Near song-like quality. A swagger that hangs between Cool Hand Luke, and Clint Eastwood. The atmosphere you created I know meant, so cannot be judged by the blueprint of what a poem should be, as, let's face it, there simply is no blueprint for poetry, it is all about interpreting the moment...and you did this well.
Good write.
My best wishes.
RGstar
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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Doug, I am giving this a six star...and I am doing it for what it is. No, not teeming with poetic devices or elaborate rhyme schemes.
It spoke to me as a lyrical piece. Near song-like quality. A swagger that hangs between Cool Hand Luke, and Clint Eastwood. The atmosphere you created I know meant, so cannot be judged by the blueprint of what a poem should be, as, let's face it, there simply is no blueprint for poetry, it is all about interpreting the moment...and you did this well.
Good write.
My best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 16-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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Of course, I am elated when U read my poetry, let alone give me a sixer. I, truly, am continuously amazed when U speak of poetry, or define its intent, limitations, or perhaps specifics on a certain type, or in general, because it is obvious U know what U are talking about. And, even better, U allude to the indefiable nature of poetry as well as the concrete. I enjoyed and understood ur review thoroughly. Thank you.
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My pleasure, Doug, for it is what it is, and flowers smell differently for a reason.
Best wishes
