Dewdrops
Perfection7 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Dewdrops, has the proper set up and presents the tiny masterpiece which feeds and protects the neighborhood spider, while providing us with wonder.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018
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This 5-7-5, Dewdrops, has the proper set up and presents the tiny masterpiece which feeds and protects the neighborhood spider, while providing us with wonder.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018
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Thanks so much for the review.
Comment from MSJVClarke
This is a nice 5-7-5. I like the theme you chose and your words are humbling and the ending serves your title well. It is a strong message, simply put and the artwork serves it well.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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This is a nice 5-7-5. I like the theme you chose and your words are humbling and the ending serves your title well. It is a strong message, simply put and the artwork serves it well.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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Thanks so much for the review!
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Thanks so much for the review!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and good 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with the art work and your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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This is a very beautiful and good 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with the art work and your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 14-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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Thank you Teri for the good review. I appreciate it.
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Thank you Teri for the good review. I appreciate it.
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you are so welcome!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the '5-7-5 Poem' writing prompt.
A good message, in your few, well chosen words.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the '5-7-5 Poem' writing prompt.
A good message, in your few, well chosen words.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 14-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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Thanks so much!
Comment from Gloria ....
This is a sound 5/7/5 poem. In the abstract it makes perfect sense especially with the capitalization of His. The artwork is lovely, stained glass windows are incredible works of art.
I wish you best of luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
Gloria
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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This is a sound 5/7/5 poem. In the abstract it makes perfect sense especially with the capitalization of His. The artwork is lovely, stained glass windows are incredible works of art.
I wish you best of luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
Gloria
Comment Written 14-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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Thanks Gloria!
Comment from Claire Hitch
A thought provoking poem whose meaning extends well beyond its few short lines. A good flow which is not always easy to achieve in the haiku format. Good choice of supporting picture too! Best of luck in the contest. Claire
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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A thought provoking poem whose meaning extends well beyond its few short lines. A good flow which is not always easy to achieve in the haiku format. Good choice of supporting picture too! Best of luck in the contest. Claire
Comment Written 14-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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Thank you Claire. I appreciate your review.
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Thank you Claire. I appreciate your review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a warm and faithful write reminding us of the beautiful church mosaics and I have seen many different churches across the world and the English ones are the best, the oldest and the most significant, for me anyway, a delightful write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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This is a warm and faithful write reminding us of the beautiful church mosaics and I have seen many different churches across the world and the English ones are the best, the oldest and the most significant, for me anyway, a delightful write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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Thank you Dolly.
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Thank you Dolly.
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Thank you Dolly.
