My Inspiration
Writing my own inspiration in a time of a storm2 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Some mixed emotions here in a tidal clash of opposites, maybe the storm makes you feel this is the Gods fighting with one another, an interesting write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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Some mixed emotions here in a tidal clash of opposites, maybe the storm makes you feel this is the Gods fighting with one another, an interesting write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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Yes you are correct, I was debating on removing that first line but oh well, I kept it in spite of myself.
Comment from giraffmang
Some strong language in this which seems to sit a little at odds with the message, but a good piece of strong emotions.
motherfucker can be a single word.
because the devil or Satin if you will is a lie - Satan?
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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Some strong language in this which seems to sit a little at odds with the message, but a good piece of strong emotions.
motherfucker can be a single word.
because the devil or Satin if you will is a lie - Satan?
Comment Written 14-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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You are correct, that is a typo. I will go in and change it. Thanks so much for your review and I am in a raging storm of lies and deceit.
