Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This is a nice spiritual poem speaks with God about post death of Jason; night appears favourable, remembering son's life and death and left for home. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018

Thanks so much.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today

Comment from FlamingSpade

Excellent

Well done. Based on your post description, I gather you lost your son too early. We lost my brother in September. Although there's sadness surrounding your post, I feel a sense of hope that he is with God and I firmly believe he is. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018

Sorry I forgot to post any other than notes two things that Jason was killed in a horrible car accident March 31st 2003 on April 1st allied with brain damage Beyond hope we donate his organs to save for people's lives three still alive today to learn more about organ tissue donation simply contact my dear friend Laura S Moretti the LSW with the gift of Life Philadelphia Pennsylvania 1 800 owners one tell her to call it sent you

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

You have a vivid use of words that brings forth strong emotion. The reader can feel the descent into darkness than the upward rise into heaven. Excellent poetic form that makes the poem real.

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 Comment Written 13-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018

Thanks darling I just love you too or yours also have to Ricky 1024 and have a wonderful rest of your new day which will start in 3 minutes which will be Sabbath Sunday on the 14th

reply by mermaids on 13-Jan-2018

Thanks and God Bless you. Elaine