Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Oh nice, an emotion poem. :) Yes reading your words I would know exactly that you were referring to the ocean. So yes, terrific job. I love the ocean so this is a nice treat to read.

Thank you for sharing.

Gloria

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018

Thanks for reading and enjoying my poem about the ocean. I appreciate your encouraging words. Elaine

Comment from writerjen

Excellent

I liked this emotion poem. Good imagery throughout the poem. Nice descriptive phrases, too. Great picture of the ocean...my favorite place to go with family and friends so this poem had significance to me. Great job, keep up the writing.

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018

Thanks for a thoughtful and encouraging review. Elaine

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hi mermaids Smiles I like how you feel ,see ,taste and hear the ocean now makes me feel I need to visit the ocean
Gert

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

reply by Gert sherwood on 14-Jan-2018

You are welcome mermaids
Gert

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

You did a really great job with this emotion poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and lovely art work to go with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018

Thanks. Elaine

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

I only wrote one and I am not one to review but I love the ocean and this is one that tells the tale in the descriptions you offer us.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018

Thanks for your encouraging comments. This poetic form is new to me. Elaine

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice image and presentation.
-Good use of imagery to
create a picture of the ocean, mermaids.
-Very good use of comparisons, as well.
-The ocean is a magical place that
can comfort and soothe with the rhythmic waves.

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 Comment Written 13-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018

Thanks for your thoughtful comments. Elaine

reply by Pam (respa) on 14-Jan-2018

You are welcome, Elaine.

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

Hi Elainr.
This is beautiful, as beautiful as the one I just posted.
Check it out.
It was rich and well-read with no grammar issues.
And, the theme as well as the Imagery was beautiful.
Objective and Adjective Contents and measures were firmly in place.
Thanks!
Dr. Ricky 1024

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 Comment Written 13-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018

Thanks. Elaine