Faith in Action
free verse15 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful heartfelt poem you have penned my friend. You used very good wording with a great message for us all. You used great imagery with the art work. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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This is a very beautiful heartfelt poem you have penned my friend. You used very good wording with a great message for us all. You used great imagery with the art work. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 13-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
learn from cardinals, chickadees
goldfinches who never question God
the world sees the dandelion
as a weed while God views her
as an exquisite flower created
by His hands
So true and so passionate. He knows it all
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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learn from cardinals, chickadees
goldfinches who never question God
the world sees the dandelion
as a weed while God views her
as an exquisite flower created
by His hands
So true and so passionate. He knows it all
Comment Written 13-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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Thanks for reading and understanding. Elaine
Comment from Ricky1024
This was another well written piece rich in Theme and imagery.
It flowed well and read well with no grammar issues.
Adjective Content was aligned well with Objective Content and Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Thanks,
Dr Ricky 1024.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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This was another well written piece rich in Theme and imagery.
It flowed well and read well with no grammar issues.
Adjective Content was aligned well with Objective Content and Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Thanks,
Dr Ricky 1024.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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I am honored by your thoughtful review. Thanks so much. Elaine
Comment from FlamingSpade
Loved your poem. Even your art selection has movement. A nice commentary for us to get involved, make a mark, make a difference. Attitude and action make the difference. Thank you for sharing.
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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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Loved your poem. Even your art selection has movement. A nice commentary for us to get involved, make a mark, make a difference. Attitude and action make the difference. Thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written 13-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from judiverse
Excellent reference to the humble dandelion. You make good use of it in your lines about seeing yourself in a heavenly light. In other words, let out there and do something good, something that would benefit others. As you state, getting out and looking at the flowers and so on flourishing in nature can give you a fresh perspective and make you more appreciative of life. Wonderful thoughts in this. judi
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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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Excellent reference to the humble dandelion. You make good use of it in your lines about seeing yourself in a heavenly light. In other words, let out there and do something good, something that would benefit others. As you state, getting out and looking at the flowers and so on flourishing in nature can give you a fresh perspective and make you more appreciative of life. Wonderful thoughts in this. judi
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Comment Written 13-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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Thanks for your positive comments. I am a bit obsessed with dandelions. Elaine
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You're welcome. Dandelions do look pretty on a green field. judi
