Comment from Fabiha_N

Excellent

This is a beautifully written poem! I love the flow to the lines and the way you worded it. Having faith is the best you can do to spread happiness to others around you. Great read!

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks faith in God and living together and helping the helpless and homeless; well said, well done; thank you for sharing this with us. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

What a lovely and encouraging poem! Yes, faith in action gives us purpose for life and as you say, helps us to see ourselves in God's will in His "heavenly light."

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written faith and uplifting poem. When we look around us we see all the beautiful things God made, but we often forget we are a wonderful part of His creation.

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I wish words like this would run through my head when I'm doing errands instead of... you don't want to know.
Well done, well written.
Thank you for sharing this lovely piece with us.
Sharon

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018

Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Mermaids,

This is a great sentiment and it's kind of you to share with everyone. It definitely shows your wisdom and maturity, so kudos! If only we could all get this through our thick skulls and then KEEP it there! hahaha! Thanks!

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is a warm and serene magical write alikening ourselves to flowers that have not been forgotten for their natural beauty. Everyone is special in their own way, I enjoyed your words, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

You've done a great job with your presentation in this uplifting poem, Mermaids. The poem looks like the stem to the yellow flower or a crowning halo.

A heartfelt sentiment to the power of faith and good grace.

Very thoughtfully written and presented.

Gloria

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from doggymad

Excellent

Nice uplifting write with a message that could carry a person through a bad day or week.

I like the use of the dandelion which we all considered to be a nuisance. As you say God didn't see it that way at all

hugs

Freda

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018

Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

I love your sudden thought of how one can keep their faith alive by appreciating God's creations of nature even the dis-liked medallion and the best part showing you care by loving your neighbor

Gert

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018

Thanks for your positive comments. Elaine