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Lanturne: Contest Entry17 total reviews
Comment from jenintorre
This a very good lanturne poem that fits the criteria perfectly and portrays an excellent message in very few words. Good luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018
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This a very good lanturne poem that fits the criteria perfectly and portrays an excellent message in very few words. Good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018
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Thank you ever so much for your kind review!
diane
Comment from MelB
Hi Mrs. KT, this is a fantastic poem with an equally great and important message. Man does seem to have a propensity to destroy things. Spot on syllable count.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018
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Hi Mrs. KT, this is a fantastic poem with an equally great and important message. Man does seem to have a propensity to destroy things. Spot on syllable count.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018
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Hello!
Much appreciation for your kind review!
diane
Comment from Ken the Carpenter
Thank you, not sure if the content was meaningful or just creating the poem as required so not sure to comment but the truth is sometimes hard to justify however if we manage to destroy completely who we are nature without our help will again create a garden. So there:)
love all there is.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018
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Thank you, not sure if the content was meaningful or just creating the poem as required so not sure to comment but the truth is sometimes hard to justify however if we manage to destroy completely who we are nature without our help will again create a garden. So there:)
love all there is.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018
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Hello!
I'm not certain I understand the first part of your review; I thought a great deal of the message I was penning. But I do appreciate your taking the time to stop by and review...
diane
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi KT how true and I like the simple yet profound message in this Lanturne contest entry. Good luck with you effort. Cheers Christine
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018
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Hi KT how true and I like the simple yet profound message in this Lanturne contest entry. Good luck with you effort. Cheers Christine
Comment Written 15-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018
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Thank you for your kind words and review, Chrisy710
diane
Comment from mvbrooks
Interesting match of image and wording as nature seems caught on the fence-and the piece of nature is wilting in its captivity. That seems to mirror the idea that "destroying" never brings "peace."
This is a very challenging poem style--you've made it flow gracefully while including a clear message. well done
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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Interesting match of image and wording as nature seems caught on the fence-and the piece of nature is wilting in its captivity. That seems to mirror the idea that "destroying" never brings "peace."
This is a very challenging poem style--you've made it flow gracefully while including a clear message. well done
Comment Written 14-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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Thank you for your thoughtful review. So pleased you appreciated it...diane
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Lanturne poem. Humans are a peculiar nation who try to find peace by making war with each other, while they ignore the fact that they can find peace within themselves.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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A very well-written Lanturne poem. Humans are a peculiar nation who try to find peace by making war with each other, while they ignore the fact that they can find peace within themselves.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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Thank you for your kind and thoughtful review. I believe this is my first turn at a Lanturne poem; a bit challenging!
diane
Comment from jaded831
Very profound, you followed the criteria admirably. Your poem says so much using limited amount of syllables. It makes the reader think, I like that. Unfortunately the battle between good and evil has always been around, and always will.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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Very profound, you followed the criteria admirably. Your poem says so much using limited amount of syllables. It makes the reader think, I like that. Unfortunately the battle between good and evil has always been around, and always will.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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Thank you ever so much for your thoughtful review. diane
Comment from Bichon
A very true poem. There is not a lot of peace in the world today, and I doubt there will be for a while. Great poem that says a much needed message.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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A very true poem. There is not a lot of peace in the world today, and I doubt there will be for a while. Great poem that says a much needed message.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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Thank you for your kind review...
Comment from Rasmine
Good poem except for one thing I see. Maybe I am wrong (I'm terrible at syllables). Line four, I think, has three syllables, not four. Good luck in the competition.
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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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Good poem except for one thing I see. Maybe I am wrong (I'm terrible at syllables). Line four, I think, has three syllables, not four. Good luck in the competition.
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Comment Written 14-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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Nev- er end in = four syllables.
Thank you for stopping by.
Comment from Liberty Justice
NOW THAT'S SO DEEP. How horrible it is that man feels he has to destroy. All through history we read about senseless endless destruction of man to conquer, to gain power, to gain land or assets. World is dangerous. NICELY WRITTEN. liberty justice
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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NOW THAT'S SO DEEP. How horrible it is that man feels he has to destroy. All through history we read about senseless endless destruction of man to conquer, to gain power, to gain land or assets. World is dangerous. NICELY WRITTEN. liberty justice
Comment Written 14-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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My sincere appreciation for your thoughtful and kind review...
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Thanks for sharing and for wishing me well in contest, today. Indeed, I will do well, only if I get enough loyal supporters. liberty justice
