This Time - That Time 2
Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "Joe's Disappointment"Veronica is sent back again
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Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
'Yeh could be right. But Bristol be a long ways from 'ere, an' it'll take a week o' more to walk that far, dependin' on how fast yeh can walk. Then yeh gotta find the place and 'ope they can tell yeh somethin'. Could be yer wrong about Jacob being there, and it would all be for nowt.'n GOOD grief the days when people had to walk everywhere unless they had a horse and/ or carriage with horses. Amazing work from you Sandra. A convincing and absorbing story. I enjoyed it and will be continuing to read it. Good colloquial language and dialect conveyed also. Well done kindest regards Meia xx
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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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'Yeh could be right. But Bristol be a long ways from 'ere, an' it'll take a week o' more to walk that far, dependin' on how fast yeh can walk. Then yeh gotta find the place and 'ope they can tell yeh somethin'. Could be yer wrong about Jacob being there, and it would all be for nowt.'n GOOD grief the days when people had to walk everywhere unless they had a horse and/ or carriage with horses. Amazing work from you Sandra. A convincing and absorbing story. I enjoyed it and will be continuing to read it. Good colloquial language and dialect conveyed also. Well done kindest regards Meia xx
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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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Thank you so much, Meia, for your lovely review. I'm so pleased you still enjoy reading it. Big hugs, Sandra xx
Comment from damommy
Oh, goodness. It seems they one step forward and two step back. Now where to get the chocolate. And how to get to Bristol? I know Veronica will think of something. It will be interesting to see if Joe makes a business out of chocolate.
-Jacob's whereabouts now.["]
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Oh, goodness. It seems they one step forward and two step back. Now where to get the chocolate. And how to get to Bristol? I know Veronica will think of something. It will be interesting to see if Joe makes a business out of chocolate.
-Jacob's whereabouts now.["]
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Comment Written 14-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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Thank you, Yvonne, for this lovely review. It does seem that way, doesn't it. Just wait for the next part!! lol! Thank you for finding my errant speech tag, he's always nipping off! I've put his back now. :)) Thanks again, my friend, big hugs, Sandra xxxx
