Reviews from

Baby Boomer's Lament

Ah, the dreams we had

52 total reviews 
Comment from Joan E.
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Thank you for sharing your reflections on aging and fading idealism. You struck strong chords and your rhymed couplets added to the intensity. Keep the faith--peace! -Joan

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
    Thank you, Joan.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

A very well-written poem. When we look back on our lives it seems like a moment that flash through our minds. Some of us experienced war before but nothing changed, the people are all still mad at each other for one or other reason.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
    Thank you, Sandra.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Where did our youth go? That is a very good question.
I lost track of time, life got in the way.
I like your poem, very well written and expressed.
Sharon

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
    Thank you, Sharon.
Comment from Janet Foor
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

A thought provoking poem Victor. I was born on the fringe of the Baby Boomer Age and I remember much of your references.

Well done.
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
    Thank you, Janet.
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Hello Victor. I think that I remember more mustangs and Woodstock and the fact I was just a tad young to give that a show lol. Liked the reminisce quality that I hear in this one. Well written. Nice to see you writing again. xx Kiwi

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 12-Jan-2018
    God, mustangs and Woodstock. How right U are. My best high school friend, Mark-had a mustang. Always drove on fumes and right front and back tires on side of road in the gravel. Goddamned idiot. Of course, he's lookin at anything but driving. I called him "Stuff", and the nickname stuck.
Comment from Boogienights
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

I liked this very much. Every generation has its own dreams..some are realized, some aren't . The main thing is to have dreams and to do whatever we can to see them fulfilled. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
    Correct. Thank you.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Having been born in 1960, I remember much about 'Nam, Nixon and a lot of stuff that came afterward, Doug.
Andy Warhol was a big influence on me as a young man, artistically speaking, as was H.R. Giger later on. Poets such as Denise Duhamel, Gary Soto, and Paul Muldoon made me wanna write.
Hippies, the "Love Revolution", and the Disco area all came and went.
So has a lot of our nation's morals and ethics as well.
Great write.
~Dean

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
    Yup. Yes, sir my sniper.
    Hope you made the veil, my friend.

    Doug
Comment from Wetbelly01
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

So true, so true!... As a Baby Boomer myself, I've lately
wondered... "What the hell happened?!"....
I like your poem!... Flows along great and the message is
pretty thought provoking!.... Well Done, as far as I'm concerned!!

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
    Thank you.
Comment from Ricky1024
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Baby Boomers lemon works perfectly with this as I am one also born in 1954 red well flowed well with no grammar issues as well as object the contents were excellent and both friendly and placed descriptive measures alarm perfectly thanks for this doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
    Thank you, Ricky.
reply by Ricky1024 on 23-Jul-2020
Comment from Ogden
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Thanks for sharing your thoughts, Victor.

Yes, it's wave after wave of disappointments generation after generation, fighting against the tides.

Let's try to believe there will be future generations to reflect on how we survived the uncertainty of today.

Wishing you a happy, healthy 2018,

Don (Ogden)

)

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
    Thank you, Don.
reply by Ogden on 23-Jul-2020
    You're very welcome, Doug.
    Don