Bundle Up!
A mom's advice these wintry days10 total reviews
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is a great poem. The picture fits it perfectly. I don't understand why some writers don't add pictures to their posts. I am going to fan you so I can read more of your writing.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018
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This is a great poem. The picture fits it perfectly. I don't understand why some writers don't add pictures to their posts. I am going to fan you so I can read more of your writing.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018
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Thank you, Thomas, for your wonderful praise of ?Bundle Up.? Check your profile page and notice you have already fanned me. Rod
Comment from BeasPeas
This is so cute. Congratulations on your win. Good job with your poem. I must admit to stumbling here: "each breath's a hic-e+up." Still the poem is nostalgic and reminds me of my own childhood and bundling up my kids as youngsters. Marilyn
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2018
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This is so cute. Congratulations on your win. Good job with your poem. I must admit to stumbling here: "each breath's a hic-e+up." Still the poem is nostalgic and reminds me of my own childhood and bundling up my kids as youngsters. Marilyn
Comment Written 11-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2018
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Hi Marilyn. Thanks for sharing my children?s poem and the congrats. I am delighted it brought back memories. I deliberately wrote Hic-e-up the way it sounds (onomatopoeia?) so the reader could hear this poor kid trying to breathe.
Rod
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Good poem which I enjoyed reading.
Comment from rhonnie69
Happy New Year RODG: You've made me recall when during winter school days, Mom used to over stuff my clothes with me. This poem has such a realistic glow. I like it. Next time I'm
stuffing my clothes with me to go out on cold days your poem will come to my memory. And I'll smile, and bear it. Thank you for sharing. I like, I like. rhonnie69.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2018
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Happy New Year RODG: You've made me recall when during winter school days, Mom used to over stuff my clothes with me. This poem has such a realistic glow. I like it. Next time I'm
stuffing my clothes with me to go out on cold days your poem will come to my memory. And I'll smile, and bear it. Thank you for sharing. I like, I like. rhonnie69.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2018
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I am delighted my poem could bring back fond memories of ?bundling up? on wintry days. Thanks so much for sharing. Rod
Comment from A. Louise Robertson
So well written - I love this poem, it brings back memories of going to school in New York as a child, wrapped up just like this. My favorite line is: "And gloves enclose my little hands so tight each finger cries." Very well done.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2018
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So well written - I love this poem, it brings back memories of going to school in New York as a child, wrapped up just like this. My favorite line is: "And gloves enclose my little hands so tight each finger cries." Very well done.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2018
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Thank you so much, Louise, for your very positive comments about "Bundle Up!."
Comment from Joy Graham
Hello Mystery Poet,
I really enjoyed this poem. It is a terrific contest entry. I enjoyed your rhymes. The descriptions of bundling up were so good that it brought back memories of my own childhood bundling up days. The only thing missing in this poem is needing to go pee after all the work to get bundled up lol! Then again Imthink Robert Munsch took care of that story.
I think you have an outstanding contest entry. Too bad you didn't include a picture. Kids like to look at pictures when they read. This would make an excellent board book for young kids.
Sincerely Joy xx
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2018
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Hello Mystery Poet,
I really enjoyed this poem. It is a terrific contest entry. I enjoyed your rhymes. The descriptions of bundling up were so good that it brought back memories of my own childhood bundling up days. The only thing missing in this poem is needing to go pee after all the work to get bundled up lol! Then again Imthink Robert Munsch took care of that story.
I think you have an outstanding contest entry. Too bad you didn't include a picture. Kids like to look at pictures when they read. This would make an excellent board book for young kids.
Sincerely Joy xx
Comment Written 10-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2018
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Thank you so much, Joy, for the wonderful review of "Bundle Up." I am trying to include a picture, but FanStory software keeps refusing me.
Comment from Ricky1024
This is a Christmas contest entry prop very well written Rich and Famous 12 energy how about warming up putting on the proper clothes and everything right well flood well with no grammar issue so to speak I checked both excellent firmly in place the scripture measures line perfectly good luck in the contest talk to Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2018
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This is a Christmas contest entry prop very well written Rich and Famous 12 energy how about warming up putting on the proper clothes and everything right well flood well with no grammar issue so to speak I checked both excellent firmly in place the scripture measures line perfectly good luck in the contest talk to Ricky 1024
Comment Written 10-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2018
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Thank you for sharing my children's poem, Ricky. I am glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Well said, well done, mom's teaching in wintry days cared, her righteous guidelines bundled up; a pleasant read rhyming poem, thank you for sharing this, good luck to you for the contest. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2018
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Well said, well done, mom's teaching in wintry days cared, her righteous guidelines bundled up; a pleasant read rhyming poem, thank you for sharing this, good luck to you for the contest. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 10-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2018
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Thank you for sharing my children's poem, DR ALCREATOR. I am delighted you enjoyed it.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I have never heard the expression 'bundle up' before. But your descriptions make it clear and we wrap our kids up warm in the winter so that they can play outside and I love the fourth stanza best! Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2018
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I have never heard the expression 'bundle up' before. But your descriptions make it clear and we wrap our kids up warm in the winter so that they can play outside and I love the fourth stanza best! Love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2018
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Thank you so much for sharing my poem, Dolly, and your kind praise. "Bundle up" may be a Midwestern phrase, but even my Canadian grandmother used to use it when I was a kid
Comment from Dean Kuch
Hahaha, good rhyming all throughout this cute little children's poem, Anonymous.
I don't know if you have ever seen that beloved Christmas classic, 'A Christmas Story', but I couldn't help but think of the scene where little Ralphie gets bundled up by his mom so much he looks like a tick about to pop, LOL.
Well done, and good luck in he contest.
~Dean
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2018
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Hahaha, good rhyming all throughout this cute little children's poem, Anonymous.
I don't know if you have ever seen that beloved Christmas classic, 'A Christmas Story', but I couldn't help but think of the scene where little Ralphie gets bundled up by his mom so much he looks like a tick about to pop, LOL.
Well done, and good luck in he contest.
~Dean
Comment Written 10-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2018
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I am delighted you enjoyed this poem, Dean. No, I have never seen "A Christmas Story," hut love the clip you inserted.
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Really? Why, that's one of the greatest classic Christmas stories of all time. Right up there with 'It's a Wonderful Life', and 'A Christmas Carol'.
You're welcome. :)
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 'Children's'Rhyming Poem' writing prompt.
Well done. Good story, very well rhymed.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the 'Children's'Rhyming Poem' writing prompt.
Well done. Good story, very well rhymed.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 09-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2018
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Many thanks for sharing my children's poem, Sharon, and your very kind praise.
