Comment from rhonnie69

Excellent

Happy New Year Ogden: Your poem makes me glad for you, and Dottie too. Your ditty about Dottie's kitty is thoughtful and witty. I like your poem. I like Dottie and her kitty. I like you too.
Thank you for sharing. I know you'll share more, for people to adore. Keep sharing. rhonnie69.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2018

Thanks for your poetic compliments, Rhonnie. I will be pleased to share more.
Don

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I liked your idea of teaching counting through an appealing poem. I enjoyed your rhymes and Sneezy's growing from a kitten into a "CAT"! Best wishes in the contest- Joan

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2018

Thank you for your very encouraging comments, Joan!

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

A counting rhyme with a difference, showing the growth of two disparate numbers. Maybe a slightly difficult concept but one that you have delivered with a good sense of fun.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2018

Your insightful comments are always appreciated, Tony. Thank you..

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

This is a good entry for the 'Children's Rhyming Poem' writing prompt.
Well done. A fun poem for kiddies.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2018

Thank you for your review, Sharon.