Mother Nature Has Her Say
confronting climate change17 total reviews
Comment from Carolyn Shelton
Good job with the poem. I love the " as humans we do affect our climate that we devastate." line.
Good suggestions made as to how we can help make a change. Maybe you could emphasize how if everyone does his/her part it can all add up to making a big difference.
Everyone is always saying how "there is nothing I can do". but we need to understand how each of us doing our part does help.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2018
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Good job with the poem. I love the " as humans we do affect our climate that we devastate." line.
Good suggestions made as to how we can help make a change. Maybe you could emphasize how if everyone does his/her part it can all add up to making a big difference.
Everyone is always saying how "there is nothing I can do". but we need to understand how each of us doing our part does help.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2018
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Thank you, Carolyn, for your review and suggestion for improving my poem.
Connie
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You are very welcome!
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I like the artwork accompanying the poem. It's very well written, thought provoking, and true. We have really abused our earth in ways that we shouldn't have. Perhaps it's not to late for a change. Nicely done and keep them coming.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2018
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I like the artwork accompanying the poem. It's very well written, thought provoking, and true. We have really abused our earth in ways that we shouldn't have. Perhaps it's not to late for a change. Nicely done and keep them coming.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2018
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Thank you, Jeff, for your thoughtful review.
Connie
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a poignant and truthful write about saving our planet and making changes to make improvements that we are all responsible for, your poem is well rhymed with great flow and a joy to read, love Dolly x
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This is a poignant and truthful write about saving our planet and making changes to make improvements that we are all responsible for, your poem is well rhymed with great flow and a joy to read, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2018
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What a lovely review, Dolly. Thank you so much.
Connie
Comment from Dean Kuch
Yeah, Connie. It's kind of scary to think of the kind of world we're leaving behind for our children, grandchildren, and their children, in turn.
If we don't do something to reduce our carbon footprint--and fast!--, the consequences will be dire, I'm afraid.
Mother Nature is already rebelling.
She won't put up with it much longer.
Nice poem and social commentary.
Take care,
~Dean
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2018
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Yeah, Connie. It's kind of scary to think of the kind of world we're leaving behind for our children, grandchildren, and their children, in turn.
If we don't do something to reduce our carbon footprint--and fast!--, the consequences will be dire, I'm afraid.
Mother Nature is already rebelling.
She won't put up with it much longer.
Nice poem and social commentary.
Take care,
~Dean
Comment Written 09-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2018
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Thank you, Dean, for your most thoughtful review.
My best to you.
Connie
Comment from A. Louise Robertson
Way to go here with a poem that might wake one or two folks up to what is happening to our earth. My favorite line: "Have we not shown her due respect" - I thought about that a lot - and the choice of words is perfect! Well done!
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Way to go here with a poem that might wake one or two folks up to what is happening to our earth. My favorite line: "Have we not shown her due respect" - I thought about that a lot - and the choice of words is perfect! Well done!
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Comment Written 09-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2018
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Thank you so much for your review.
Connie
Comment from Sharon Haiste
Well written and well said.
Mother Nature will always do what is best for the world. Even if she has to wipe us out.
As human beings we tend to use and abuse. Slowly, some of us are realizing that we can't keep it up. We just need to keep spreading the word to get more people on board.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2018
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Well written and well said.
Mother Nature will always do what is best for the world. Even if she has to wipe us out.
As human beings we tend to use and abuse. Slowly, some of us are realizing that we can't keep it up. We just need to keep spreading the word to get more people on board.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2018
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Thank you, Sharon, for such a thoughtful review.
Connie
Comment from Sugarray77
Very well done. I enjoyed this and thought you kept the pace and tempo going along at a good clip. I look forward to reading more of your as you have them available. Well done.
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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2018
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Very well done. I enjoyed this and thought you kept the pace and tempo going along at a good clip. I look forward to reading more of your as you have them available. Well done.
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Comment Written 09-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2018
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Thank you so much for your thoughtful review.
Connie
