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Abscess

1-6-1 offering

8 total reviews 
Comment from Dean Kuch
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If mankind forgets the mistakes it has made throughout history it will be doomed to repeat them.
Your 1-6-1 is well composed. Anyone who cares enough to read it will easily see that a lot of thought went into its construction.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
~Dean

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 11-Jan-2018
    Thank you for your kind review.
reply by Dean Kuch on 11-Jan-2018
    You bet. :)
Comment from kiwigirl2821
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Hello Mystery Writer. I know that stress is responsible for many many things. I guess I question the word Historical. Is it hysterical blindness instead. Not sure but this one left me with questions. good luck. xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 11-Jan-2018
    Thank you. Historical blindness is, indeed, often hysterical... but I intended historical...
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written 1-6-1 poem. Too much stress are not good to anyone and can lead to a total mess. When our health suffers from the pressure we place on ourselves.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 11-Jan-2018
    Thank you for your review.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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This meets the contest requirements beautifully with a correct line / syllable count and consistent end rhyme. Stress is a mess and creates problems for the person and everyone around them. All the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 11-Jan-2018
    Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the 1-6-1 writing prompt.
Good message, well told in your few words.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 11-Jan-2018
    My appreciation for your kids d review.
Comment from rspoet
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This is a fine 1-6-1 poem and entry for the contest
with correct syllables and the three required rhymes
(four if you include the title)
It can be read top to bottom or bottom to top
Excellent choice of art work to match
Well done
Good luck in the contest
RS

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 11-Jan-2018
    Thank you for your kind review bd review.
Comment from RodG
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I truly like this 1-6-1 that focuses sharply on the world's ugly situation. Indeed, many of us are blind to lessons we should have learned from past events. Succinct social commentary.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 11-Jan-2018
    Your review is deeply appreciated.
Comment from tfawcus
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How little we seem to learn from history. Mankind just seems to keep on repeating the same old mistakes but with more and more tragic consequences as technology increases our ability to cause harm.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 11-Jan-2018
    Thank you for your kind review.