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short poem4 total reviews
Comment from Sugarray77
A good 1-6-1 prompt contest entry. I thought the artwork was perfect for your subject and added the right touch. Good luck on this contest entry. Love the teddy bear! Regards.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018
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A good 1-6-1 prompt contest entry. I thought the artwork was perfect for your subject and added the right touch. Good luck on this contest entry. Love the teddy bear! Regards.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018
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Thank you for your review
Comment from persevere
This is a delightful 1-6-1 accompanied by a charming illustration. There is nothing forced in your piece and the required rhyming is there. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018
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This is a delightful 1-6-1 accompanied by a charming illustration. There is nothing forced in your piece and the required rhyming is there. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018
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Thank you for your review
Comment from N.K. Wagner
You've written a nice 1-6-1 poem. It's perfectly rhymed. I like the satori-like final line. Sums it up nicely. And the teddy bear is sweet. A very cute addition. :) Nancy
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018
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You've written a nice 1-6-1 poem. It's perfectly rhymed. I like the satori-like final line. Sums it up nicely. And the teddy bear is sweet. A very cute addition. :) Nancy
Comment Written 07-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018
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Thank you for your review
Comment from RodG
Just celebrated my nephew's 5th birthday and your 1-6-1 describes his reaction to ALL his gifts perfectly. You also handled the rhyme requirement very well.
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Just celebrated my nephew's 5th birthday and your 1-6-1 describes his reaction to ALL his gifts perfectly. You also handled the rhyme requirement very well.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018
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Thank you for your review
