haiku (snow no longer falls)
haiku6 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written haiku. It seems the weather patterns have changed dramatically over the past few years. Flood waters instead if snow, it will freeze anyway. We had on going thunderstorms for six hours last week, as soon as it seems to be over another one starts.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2018
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A very well-written haiku. It seems the weather patterns have changed dramatically over the past few years. Flood waters instead if snow, it will freeze anyway. We had on going thunderstorms for six hours last week, as soon as it seems to be over another one starts.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2018
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from RodG
You must be describing Boston or one of towns on the Cape after that recent "bomb cyclone." In only 17 syllables you have described this shocking event vividly. I hope you weren't inundated. Rod
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018
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You must be describing Boston or one of towns on the Cape after that recent "bomb cyclone." In only 17 syllables you have described this shocking event vividly. I hope you weren't inundated. Rod
Comment Written 07-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018
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Thank you for your review. Yes, the news from Boston led to this poem.
Do not worry, I am in no danger.
Comment from writerjen
We're having the same phenomena here in the DC area. Lots of frozen pipes, broken pipes...what a mess. You followed the 5-7-5 haiku requirements. Wondering if a picture would have been an added addition to your poem.. it lacked a bit of flare that a picture could give it without over powering the words you wrote.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018
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We're having the same phenomena here in the DC area. Lots of frozen pipes, broken pipes...what a mess. You followed the 5-7-5 haiku requirements. Wondering if a picture would have been an added addition to your poem.. it lacked a bit of flare that a picture could give it without over powering the words you wrote.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018
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Thank you for your review and suggestion.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This can be treacherous underfoot and on roads and cause many people to fall on the slippery surface and cars to crash, your summed it up in a few words, magical, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018
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This can be treacherous underfoot and on roads and cause many people to fall on the slippery surface and cars to crash, your summed it up in a few words, magical, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a good haiku used to describe the recent events in nature.
Well written, well said.
Our weather patterns seem to be so far from the norm that it gives us good material for our verses.
Thank you for sharing this.
Sharon
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018
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This is a good haiku used to describe the recent events in nature.
Well written, well said.
Our weather patterns seem to be so far from the norm that it gives us good material for our verses.
Thank you for sharing this.
Sharon
Comment Written 07-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018
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Thank you for your review. Yes, our weather patterns are far from the norm.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very good and vivid with words poem you have penned. The six stars is because I can picture this scene in my mind as I read it. I enjoyed it very much! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018
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This is a very good and vivid with words poem you have penned. The six stars is because I can picture this scene in my mind as I read it. I enjoyed it very much! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 07-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018
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Thank you for your review.
