Jealousy
Jealousy is a demon to be overcome.3 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
I agree with you. Your poem together with your author's note sends a positive message to be happy with what we've got. My only suggestion would be to change the colors so the font stands out better from the background. Marilyn
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2018
I agree with you. Your poem together with your author's note sends a positive message to be happy with what we've got. My only suggestion would be to change the colors so the font stands out better from the background. Marilyn
Comment Written 07-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2018
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Thank you for the read and suggestion. Will go back and adjust as necessary. Many thanks.
Have a great week.
Brigitte
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Nature 5-7-5 writing prompt.
Well said in a few words. And your picture is amazing.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018
I think this is a good entry for the Nature 5-7-5 writing prompt.
Well said in a few words. And your picture is amazing.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 06-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018
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Thank you for this nice review and for reading. I had more fun with the author notes though because I could use more words.
Blessings,
Brigitte
Comment from Sugarray77
A good 3-5-3 Nature prompt contest entry. I thought the artwork was perfect for your subject and added the right touch. Good luck on this contest. Regards.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018
A good 3-5-3 Nature prompt contest entry. I thought the artwork was perfect for your subject and added the right touch. Good luck on this contest. Regards.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018
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Thank you for reading and the kind review.
Have a blessed evening.
Brigitte