Sashaying Iris
Nature 3-5-34 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
Very nicely composed. The iris is one of the most delicate petaled flowers, although the stem is strong. Each word is descriptive and gives a feeling of grace. Marilyn
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2018
Very nicely composed. The iris is one of the most delicate petaled flowers, although the stem is strong. Each word is descriptive and gives a feeling of grace. Marilyn
Comment Written 07-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2018
-
Thanks so much!
-
Thanks so much!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
True feeling is well conveyed, Nature in springtime is gracious here, fine beauty is coherently worded; wish you good luck to the Nature 3-5-3 contest. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018
True feeling is well conveyed, Nature in springtime is gracious here, fine beauty is coherently worded; wish you good luck to the Nature 3-5-3 contest. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 06-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018
-
Thanks so much!
Comment from mermaids
Your 3-5-3 form creates a picture of nature. The beauty and elegance of the Iris is seen in your words. "Spring time grace" is a fitting last line that shows spring will arrive.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018
Your 3-5-3 form creates a picture of nature. The beauty and elegance of the Iris is seen in your words. "Spring time grace" is a fitting last line that shows spring will arrive.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018
-
Thanks so much!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Nature 3-5-3 writing prompt.
Well said in a few words. And your picture is beautiful.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018
I think this is a good entry for the Nature 3-5-3 writing prompt.
Well said in a few words. And your picture is beautiful.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 06-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018
-
Thanks so much!
-
Thanks so much!