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Sashaying Iris

Nature 3-5-3

4 total reviews 
Comment from BeasPeas
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Very nicely composed. The iris is one of the most delicate petaled flowers, although the stem is strong. Each word is descriptive and gives a feeling of grace. Marilyn

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2018


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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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True feeling is well conveyed, Nature in springtime is gracious here, fine beauty is coherently worded; wish you good luck to the Nature 3-5-3 contest. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2018


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    Thanks so much!
Comment from mermaids
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Your 3-5-3 form creates a picture of nature. The beauty and elegance of the Iris is seen in your words. "Spring time grace" is a fitting last line that shows spring will arrive.

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2018


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Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the Nature 3-5-3 writing prompt.
Well said in a few words. And your picture is beautiful.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018
    Thanks so much!
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018
    Thanks so much!