Comment from Sherman541

Excellent

Love the nature songs and fun things they all do together. I love the picture of the bear and tree too. The bear looks like he is playing hide and seek. Very fun poem. Sherman

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

reply by Sherman541 on 29-Jan-2018

you are welcome

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Very cute indeed mermaids. I get a real charge out of the bear peeking out from behind the tree. It's a magical trio.

Great job and keep going. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from ScarletAffliction

Excellent

favorite lines:
the squirrel gives soprano 
notes as she bows graciously

How human is your squirrel? I love this! and even the moon was a bit human. Great job on this!

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018

Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine

Comment from Badger_29

Excellent

I'm so happy I Came Upon This continuation, of the duet and Trio. I see hear you've Incorporated the cast of the previous riding with a wonderful combination of whimsical nature which fits the title nicely is it our four elements making music of a most magical nature.
Came together real well and ended on a nice note under the glistening Starry Skies a wonderful magical scene which can you create in the The Mind's Eye of the reader. Thank you so much I'm looking forward to a pentet. And blessings, Darren

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018

Love your thoughtful review. I began with one poem and it seemed to just continue. Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This is a fantastic poem about singing moon and squirrel, an interesting read; well said, well done, thanks for sharing this with us. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018

Thanks for your encouraging comments and positive review. Elaine

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

Nicely done. You'll have a whole animal band going, soon.
Nicely written, easy to follow. And the picture is the perfect match.
Thank you for sharing this lovely piece with us.
Sharon

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from June Sargent

Excellent

Well this was certainly a fanciful and enjoyable poem! So that's what goes on at nights in the woods while the rest of the world is sleeping. Thanks for sharing your vision.

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

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 Comment Written 06-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

No wonder the contingent is all smiles, as the bear joins in by beating out the time with a stick. These are rare musicians. Nice detail about the moon's baritone voice. It's interesting the squirrel has a soprano voice. What marvelous music they will make in the night. Very interesting and picturesque. judi

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018

Love your review. Thanks so much. I am on a roll with this adding of characters. Elaine

reply by judiverse on 07-Jan-2018

You're very welcome. I like that you bring music into your poems that much. judi

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Excellent short poem. I really like your use of four different characters and their musical interaction. It is balanced and flows well. Good job. Well done.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018

Thanks for a great review. Elaine