Footprints
This is an antonym poem.30 total reviews
Comment from Pantygynt
This demonstrates an excellent and unusual selection of antonyms accompanied by a splendid expanded explanation in the rhyming centrepiece of this antonyms poem.
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This demonstrates an excellent and unusual selection of antonyms accompanied by a splendid expanded explanation in the rhyming centrepiece of this antonyms poem.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2018
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Hello Pantygynt. Thank you for the excellent review and rating for my antonym poem Footprints. I appreciate your encouraging comments about the structure of the poem and your support very much, my friend. Thank you.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Antonym poem about questions and answers. Our questions can sometimes be very confusing until we find the answers and then realize it was not that confusing after all.
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A very well-written Antonym poem about questions and answers. Our questions can sometimes be very confusing until we find the answers and then realize it was not that confusing after all.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2018
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Hello Sandra. Thank you for the excellent review and rating for my antonym poem Footprints. I appreciate your encouraging comments and support very much, my friend. Thank you.
Comment from rama devi
I really like this entry. Unique approach with a fine thematic depth. I believe nature gives profound answers too. I love the words tiny footprints in this context! The poem has great phonetics as well, with the alliteration of C and Q sounds in so many words and the consonance of F & S and the alliteration plus consonance of P. A six if I had one.
Lovely presentation.
Best of luck!
Warmly, rd
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I really like this entry. Unique approach with a fine thematic depth. I believe nature gives profound answers too. I love the words tiny footprints in this context! The poem has great phonetics as well, with the alliteration of C and Q sounds in so many words and the consonance of F & S and the alliteration plus consonance of P. A six if I had one.
Lovely presentation.
Best of luck!
Warmly, rd
Comment Written 06-Jan-2018
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Hello rd,
Thank you for the excellent, insightful review and the excellent rating. I actually thought of you as I wrote the words. It is often in simplicity that the answer lies. Thank you for the best luck wishes.
RS
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How wonderful you thought of me! Touched and honored. Warmest Smiles, rd
Comment from lyenochka
A perfect poem from a nature lover as yourself to write! Yes, sometimes the questions our spirits ask are answered when we quiet ourselves and observe nature's "tiny footprints" and even the colossal ones!
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A perfect poem from a nature lover as yourself to write! Yes, sometimes the questions our spirits ask are answered when we quiet ourselves and observe nature's "tiny footprints" and even the colossal ones!
Comment Written 06-Jan-2018
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Hello lyenochka,
Thank you for the excellent review and rating for my antonym poem Footprints. It is often in simplicity that the answers to complex questions lie, and nature offers subtle clues to those with open minds.
I appreciated your encouraging comments very much.
RS
Comment from Dean Kuch
I like the way in which you've written this, Robert.
Whenever I write an antonym I do it in the same way--as a continuous, ongoing sentence and one thought.
They always seem to read much more coherently and smoothly when written in this manner.
Well done.
Best wishes,
~Dean
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I like the way in which you've written this, Robert.
Whenever I write an antonym I do it in the same way--as a continuous, ongoing sentence and one thought.
They always seem to read much more coherently and smoothly when written in this manner.
Well done.
Best wishes,
~Dean
Comment Written 06-Jan-2018
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Hello Dean Thank you for the excellent review and rating for my antonym poem Footprints. Yes, I, too, prefer to write these poems as one continuous line or occasionally two distinct contrasting lines. I appreciate your encouraging comments and the best wishes very much, my friend. Thank you!
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Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good submission for the Antonym writing prompt.
Well said in your few words.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
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I think this is a good submission for the Antonym writing prompt.
Well said in your few words.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 05-Jan-2018
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Hello Sharon. Thank you for the excellent review and rating for my antonym poem Footprints. I appreciate your encouraging comments and the good luck wishes very much, my friend. Thank you.
Comment from Ricky1024
this is an antonym contest entry based on the footprints in the sand wonderfully written well with wonderful seem as well as imagery present plug will not read well with no grammar issues objective objective contents were both Furman and place descriptive measures line for perfectly good luck in the contest thank you dr. Ricky 1024
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this is an antonym contest entry based on the footprints in the sand wonderfully written well with wonderful seem as well as imagery present plug will not read well with no grammar issues objective objective contents were both Furman and place descriptive measures line for perfectly good luck in the contest thank you dr. Ricky 1024
Comment Written 05-Jan-2018
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Hello Ricky. Thank you for the excellent review and rating for my antonym poem Footprints. I appreciate your encouraging comments and the good luck wishes very much, my friend. Thank you.
Comment from Gloria ....
Beautiful presentation, Robert. The mood, and colours pair perfectly with this well-written antonym. The rhyme on lines two and three draw the two disparate meanings together.
Best wishes to you in the contest.
Gloria
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Beautiful presentation, Robert. The mood, and colours pair perfectly with this well-written antonym. The rhyme on lines two and three draw the two disparate meanings together.
Best wishes to you in the contest.
Gloria
Comment Written 05-Jan-2018
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Hello Gloria. Thank you for the excellent review and rating for my antonym poem Footprints and the presentation. I appreciate your encouraging comments and the best luck wishes very much, my friend. Thank you!
Comment from Chrissy710
Yes Robert, what an expert Antonym I am sorry I don't have a six but this is deserving for you well chosen words for this My very best wishes for the contest Cheers Christine
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Yes Robert, what an expert Antonym I am sorry I don't have a six but this is deserving for you well chosen words for this My very best wishes for the contest Cheers Christine
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Comment Written 05-Jan-2018
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Hello Christine. Thank you for the wonderful review and the excellent rating for my antonym poem Footprints. I appreciate your encouraging comments and the best wishes very much, my friend. Thank you!
Comment from Spitfire
An earthshaking message here. Mediation with bare feet planted on the ground asks no questions, but gives answers.
Nice choice of rarely used verb: befuddle. Subtle alliteration with footprints and profound.
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An earthshaking message here. Mediation with bare feet planted on the ground asks no questions, but gives answers.
Nice choice of rarely used verb: befuddle. Subtle alliteration with footprints and profound.
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Comment Written 05-Jan-2018
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Hello Spitfire. Thank you for the excellent review and rating for my antonym poem Footprints. It sometimes seems strange that answers are often right in front of us, if we could only see them. I appreciate your encouraging comments and support very much, my friend. Thank you.
