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Veronica is sent back again

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Comment from nancy_e_davis
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Wow, She does have a problem doesn't she. How can she find Jacob when she can't even control her coming and going. The poor little baby needs protection and she must find an answer soon. More than likely Jacob, who is the child's father would be able to find a place for him but she must find Jacob first.
Good Job Sandra. xx Nancy

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2018
    That would be the perfect answer, Nancy, but what if he can't be found? Fingers crossed! Thank you , my dear friend, for another lovely review. I'm really, really pleased you like my story. Hows yours coming on? Big hugs, my friend. :)
    Sandra xx
reply by nancy_e_davis on 05-Jan-2018
    I thought I gave you a six! Sorry it must have slipped.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2018
    Don't worry about it, I hadn't noticed anyway! LOL, Nancy, I'm just too happy that you are reading my book. :) xxx
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
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Surely the powers that be will guide her to the right place. This all had to be their idea. It will be interesting to see how they communicate with Veronica. If they did in the past, I've forgotten. That's a hint that you write too slowly for my short memory. :)

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 Comment Written 05-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2018
    I'm back in full swing now, Phyllis, I've had such a lot to sort out with family. All through December, looking after my stepson's dog. Then my poor son catching his leg on fire at work. I nearly had a break-down about that. I hate fire. he's okay, but will be scarred on his leg , but he isn't sleeping properly, he keeps having flash backs. i've told him he must talk to someone who can help him. But, my boy is alive. Now I am going to concentrate of getting this book finished. Thanks for the lovely review, my friend, the powers that be will arrange things discretely to find the answers. Big hugs, my friend! xx
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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Excellent writing as usual taking us to a time that we can feel part of the story. You left us wanting more as usual. No problems noted

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 Comment Written 05-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2018
    Thank you, Barb, lots to get through and problems to solve! :) Sandra xx