This Time - That Time 2
Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "Veronica's Disappointment part 2"Veronica is sent back again
23 total reviews
Comment from Joy Graham
This was a fast trip back in time. I'd love to know more about the Powers That Be and understand their reasoning better. It would help me get an overall picture, but I realize that would involve spoilers.
At the top of the page you mention this chapter is promoted until Sunday. you might want to take that down now.
Joy xx
reply by the author on 02-May-2018
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This was a fast trip back in time. I'd love to know more about the Powers That Be and understand their reasoning better. It would help me get an overall picture, but I realize that would involve spoilers.
At the top of the page you mention this chapter is promoted until Sunday. you might want to take that down now.
Joy xx
Comment Written 01-May-2018
reply by the author on 02-May-2018
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More comes out about the PTB as the story continues. They are there for a reason which will be told almost at the end. I have to keep them mysterious for a while longer. :)) Thank you for another lovely review, my friend. Your are so kind. Big hugs, Sandra xxxx
Comment from rwilliam
The suspense. I love it. You write it very well. You keep me 'on my toes' as I read. I always 'hate' when I come to the end. I want to read more. But thankfully, since I've been gone so long I can 'turn' the page and go read what happens now. LOL :-)
Wonderful chapter and I really liked the picture you picked for this chapter. Makes your character seem real.
Great writing.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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The suspense. I love it. You write it very well. You keep me 'on my toes' as I read. I always 'hate' when I come to the end. I want to read more. But thankfully, since I've been gone so long I can 'turn' the page and go read what happens now. LOL :-)
Wonderful chapter and I really liked the picture you picked for this chapter. Makes your character seem real.
Great writing.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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Aww, you say the nicest things, Rebecca, thank you! I'm sending you another big hug for another 6 stars! You are spoiling me! :)) Sandra xxxx
Comment from l.raven
Hi Sandra, some one has to know where he is...hmmmmmmmm...I wonder who that would be???...now!!!... tell Veronica...your driving her crazy....just give her a hint...don't make me get hold of Columbo...LOL...this is a great chapter sweet angel...so very well written...and the picture looks like my cousin Douglas...love you lots my sweet friend...XXXOOO...Linda
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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Hi Sandra, some one has to know where he is...hmmmmmmmm...I wonder who that would be???...now!!!... tell Veronica...your driving her crazy....just give her a hint...don't make me get hold of Columbo...LOL...this is a great chapter sweet angel...so very well written...and the picture looks like my cousin Douglas...love you lots my sweet friend...XXXOOO...Linda
Comment Written 12-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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I loved watching Columbo and was so sorry when he died. H
LOL, that went before I'd finished the first sentence!! I loved Columbo, (Peter Falk) he was a great actor. I never missed one episode. No, it's Veronica who is driving me crazy! I have to beg her to tell me what's next! I think fame has gone to her head! LOL. I thought the picture of the little boy was so sweet, and you r cousin looks like him? He must be a cutey. :) Thank you again, my dear friend. More big hugs coming your way. :) xxxxxxxxx Sandraxxx
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HI Sandra, I so love Columbo...I have every episode he ever made...and his movies... they are on VHS...but I don't care...what I see on my DVDs....I see on VHSs...and my grandkids love some of the classics...and truly...I have had two DVD players break down...and my VHS player is still running smooth...the kids watch the VHS ones more than the other....LOL...if you are having trouble getting information from Veronica...there's not just something going wrong in her head...LOL...LOL...kidding...my two cousins and my niece all had white hair...I used to babysit them...it was like the movie...Children of The Dammed...LOL...was always looking for their eyes to turn colors...LOL...but they were beautiful kids...you are always soooooooo welcome you beautiful soul you...I love your hugs...and more back at ya...loveeeeeee you...Linda xxoo
Comment from F. Wehr3
Nice work, Sandra. I enjoyed this part. Now Veronica needs to find where Jacob is. He should stick out; someone must have seen him, right? Hope so!
Looking forward to more,
Russell
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2018
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Nice work, Sandra. I enjoyed this part. Now Veronica needs to find where Jacob is. He should stick out; someone must have seen him, right? Hope so!
Looking forward to more,
Russell
Comment Written 09-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2018
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Hi Russell, thank you so much for reading this part, my friend. Yes, Jacob should stick out.... :)) Fingers crossed. xx Big hugs, Sandra xx
Comment from Pam (respa)
-I like the opening scene with Joe and the chocolate.
-It brings Ver. right into the story well.
-Joe seems to have a sense of humor, as well.
-The scene with Gwendolyn is excellent.
-We learn a lot about how Sir John is acting,
and how distraught Gwendolyn is.
-She is unsure about Jacob knowing about Francis.
-I also like the last section when Gwendolyn reveals
that Jacob is thousands of miles away as far as she knew.
-It really adds another twist to the story.
-Though Ver. might be overwhelmed, she is her
determined self, but the question now is how
is she going to be of help?
-Could it be she will go to Bristol?
-An excellent chapter, Sandra.
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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2018
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-I like the opening scene with Joe and the chocolate.
-It brings Ver. right into the story well.
-Joe seems to have a sense of humor, as well.
-The scene with Gwendolyn is excellent.
-We learn a lot about how Sir John is acting,
and how distraught Gwendolyn is.
-She is unsure about Jacob knowing about Francis.
-I also like the last section when Gwendolyn reveals
that Jacob is thousands of miles away as far as she knew.
-It really adds another twist to the story.
-Though Ver. might be overwhelmed, she is her
determined self, but the question now is how
is she going to be of help?
-Could it be she will go to Bristol?
-An excellent chapter, Sandra.
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Comment Written 08-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2018
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Pam, you are such a confidence builder, thank you so much for another of your wonderful reviews! The shiny sixes that light up the top and the bottom of your review are so appreciated, I love them. Will Veronica go to Bristol? Is he there? Hmm, I can't wait for her to let me know!! LOL. Thank you again, dear friend, Sending an extra hug this time. :)))) Sandra xxx
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You are very welcome, Sandra. Glad you like the stars. I am sure you have some kind of
plan up your sleeve for Ver.🙂 Extra hug appreciated, too.
Comment from rspoet
Sandra,
Another turn of the old screw,
Jacob as a traveling missionary,
now that would be a wrench in Veronica's plans.
But at least Joe has mastered chocolate,
maybe he'll call his new chocolate "Godiva"
make a fortune, buy the old mansion
and kick Sir John out on his duff;
thereby altering history and creating ripples in time.
Just a thought to rile Jowell for messing with history.
But, back to the past
an excellent continuation of the story
Perhaps Bristol is the next stop.
Never underestimate a woman...like Veronica.
Well done
RS
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2018
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Sandra,
Another turn of the old screw,
Jacob as a traveling missionary,
now that would be a wrench in Veronica's plans.
But at least Joe has mastered chocolate,
maybe he'll call his new chocolate "Godiva"
make a fortune, buy the old mansion
and kick Sir John out on his duff;
thereby altering history and creating ripples in time.
Just a thought to rile Jowell for messing with history.
But, back to the past
an excellent continuation of the story
Perhaps Bristol is the next stop.
Never underestimate a woman...like Veronica.
Well done
RS
Comment Written 08-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2018
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Bristol? It might be ... might not be ... LOL! I'm sure Jowell would love that, Joe making a ginormous ripple in time, he'd burst a blood vessel for sure. You might wonder where I've been living all these years, but I had to Google Godiva to see what it had to do with chocolate. I'm glad you didn't see my red face. I hadn't heard the name before. :( Thank you so much for your fun and wonderful review, my friend, and for all the bright sunshine stars. Big hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment from mbroyles2
Veronica definitely has a dilemma on her hands. Especially if Jacob is truly in a different country.
I like how Veronica has a tremendous ability to connect with the people event hough they are from a culture so long ago.
Great work!
Michael
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018
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Veronica definitely has a dilemma on her hands. Especially if Jacob is truly in a different country.
I like how Veronica has a tremendous ability to connect with the people event hough they are from a culture so long ago.
Great work!
Michael
Comment Written 07-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018
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Thank you so very much, Michael, for this lovely review and all those stars! Veronica does have her work cut out in this book, but perhaps the 'powers that be' will give her a nudge in the right direction if she gets stuck. Or not! lol. Thanks again, my friend. xx Sandra x
How is your editing going?
Comment from RGstar
Because my membership has ran out I am no longer a Premier Author, meaning I am not able to administer six stars to you when worth. Financial upgrade is not an option for me right now so I am considering my options. I tell you this as not to keep apologising with virtual sixes written atop your work or non participation in contests or voting. I will not post work for now nor vote, but know I will continue to read certain works and review sparsely until time, so please forgive me of my fan base for lack of attention at this time. I will continue to read most works. My apologies if any review during this time not full. Best Wishes. RG
Another fine write, Sandra. Sorry couldn't administer the right rating for the piece. I know I said I wouldn't comment on that but, glad to have read.
Have a good day.
RGstar
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018
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Because my membership has ran out I am no longer a Premier Author, meaning I am not able to administer six stars to you when worth. Financial upgrade is not an option for me right now so I am considering my options. I tell you this as not to keep apologising with virtual sixes written atop your work or non participation in contests or voting. I will not post work for now nor vote, but know I will continue to read certain works and review sparsely until time, so please forgive me of my fan base for lack of attention at this time. I will continue to read most works. My apologies if any review during this time not full. Best Wishes. RG
Another fine write, Sandra. Sorry couldn't administer the right rating for the piece. I know I said I wouldn't comment on that but, glad to have read.
Have a good day.
RGstar
Comment Written 07-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018
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I quite understand, RG, it's hard making ends meet for us, too. I'm hoping things will change, but won't hold my breath waiting. I'm just pleased you popped in and read my latest part. Thank you, my friend. :) Sandra xx
Comment from alexisleech
Of corse WE know the powers that be are in charge, and of course they are pulling the strings and pointing Veronicain the direction she should go. Having said that, she still has to work it all out and put the pieces of the jigsaw together.
Another great chapter, Sandra, and no spag that I can see!
So glad I have a six left.
Alexis xxx
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018
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Of corse WE know the powers that be are in charge, and of course they are pulling the strings and pointing Veronicain the direction she should go. Having said that, she still has to work it all out and put the pieces of the jigsaw together.
Another great chapter, Sandra, and no spag that I can see!
So glad I have a six left.
Alexis xxx
Comment Written 06-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018
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Aw, thank you so much for the 6 stars, Alexis! Yes, we know, but I wonder if Veronica every will??? Somehow, I doubt it, but....
LOL. Thanks for this lovely review, my friend. Big hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment from aryr
Oh my, Sandra, this definitely has some interesting twists and turns. Joe's chocolate is fantastic and passes Veronica's taste buds. Gwendolyn is overjoyed at Veronica's return but is dispared over Sir John's behavior and the future of Francis. Veronica indeed has a lot on her plate to stir through but I have faith. She is right in her thinking because The Powers would not keep sending her back if she wasn't meant to save Joe and his family and Francis by finding Jacob. Very well done my friend, very much enjoyed.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018
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Oh my, Sandra, this definitely has some interesting twists and turns. Joe's chocolate is fantastic and passes Veronica's taste buds. Gwendolyn is overjoyed at Veronica's return but is dispared over Sir John's behavior and the future of Francis. Veronica indeed has a lot on her plate to stir through but I have faith. She is right in her thinking because The Powers would not keep sending her back if she wasn't meant to save Joe and his family and Francis by finding Jacob. Very well done my friend, very much enjoyed.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018
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HI Alie, thank you so much for this lovely review. I think Veronica had it easier in the first book, at least she could get hold of Mildred a lot more. The Powers are there for her, but in the background, keeping an eye on things. I'm so pleased you are still enjoying my book, big hugs, my friend! xx Sandra x
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Now that I think about it I agree that she did have it easier in the first book. It is just so enjoyable it is comfortable to follow. You are so welcome Sandra... big hugs in return.
