Comment from frogbook

Excellent

A horrifying picture you chose for sure-haha. Interesting and original take on this tale with a bit of horror humor for good measure. Best of luck.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2018

Thank you, frogbook, for your feedback and good luck wishes.

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

Funny, humorous but horror remains; the man scooped up your bra and panties and left the room while commenting that how beautiful scent you had; well said, it's a pleasant read. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2018

Thanks for your feedback, Alcreator Litt Dear. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Comment from pome lover

Excellent

well, that certainly leaves you wondering. I don't know quite what to think about it. I guess everyone creates their own reason for his action and their own versions of how she gets home, sans clothes, etc. Quite a jolt - the ending. Was that your intention?
katharine - pome lover

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2018

Thanks for your feedback, pome lover. It was my intention to make you think about the thief's reasons for his actions and how she gets home.

reply by pome lover on 05-Jan-2018

well, I guess she had to either steal some one else's clothes from a dryer - if there were any - she couldn't call for help with no phone, and as far as the thief, no clue.

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Good

I'm not sure if this is a horror poem or just gross.
You've done well to tell a story between 100 and 200 words long, but you say the man had a 'ski-masked face with long greasy hair' but a ski-mask covert he entire head so you wouldn't see the hair. Picky but I'm having trouble imagining this.

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2018

Thanks, Sharon Meda, for your feedback.