Innovation
Man's creative abilities68 total reviews
Comment from Mark Valentine
I like the message provided by historical context here. Things are new, but the innovation that brings them is a force that threads back throughout history. The railroad tracks in your picture are a perfect image to convey that sense of thread-running-through-history. A really meaning-laden haiku - good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
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I like the message provided by historical context here. Things are new, but the innovation that brings them is a force that threads back throughout history. The railroad tracks in your picture are a perfect image to convey that sense of thread-running-through-history. A really meaning-laden haiku - good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 13-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
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Thanks for the good review and the five stars.
I hope man will still able to work as well as the new inventions.
Comment from cailinraine8
Your ideas are expressed well with these words... encompasses history and the ways of mankind. The picture is very appropriate. I would however like to see the print made larger and centered further down the page so that there is not so much empty space. Perhaps you have a reason for this, just my thoughts.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
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Your ideas are expressed well with these words... encompasses history and the ways of mankind. The picture is very appropriate. I would however like to see the print made larger and centered further down the page so that there is not so much empty space. Perhaps you have a reason for this, just my thoughts.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
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Thanks for your review and give stars. I will try to enlarge the print.
Once again, thanks for taking the time to review.
Comment from Trudi Perkins
This is an awesome write and I bet it will do you well in the contest. I like the concept of innovation in this day and age. This is a nice little poem. Thanks again
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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This is an awesome write and I bet it will do you well in the contest. I like the concept of innovation in this day and age. This is a nice little poem. Thanks again
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Thanks for taking the time to review and the five stars.
Comment from Kathy Allmon
Wow, you said a lot in a few lines of how man has changed things. For better or for worse man has changed the way we do things. Thanks for your point of view.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Wow, you said a lot in a few lines of how man has changed things. For better or for worse man has changed the way we do things. Thanks for your point of view.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Thanks for taking the time to review and the five stars.
Comment from PoemsOfDD
artisart4u, this is an interesting entry for the haiku contest. The picture allows for past industrial days and present day industrial matters to be considered given that the pollution is still obvious in many countries. Brainstorming occurred in the old days as it still does today. Collaborative thoughts create.
I did ponder the word 'ideas' in the last line. Depending on which syllable counter one uses the word is with either 2 or 3 syllables. You may want to make a mention of 2 syllables in your end notes to be clear.
Best of luck in the competition. ~DD
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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artisart4u, this is an interesting entry for the haiku contest. The picture allows for past industrial days and present day industrial matters to be considered given that the pollution is still obvious in many countries. Brainstorming occurred in the old days as it still does today. Collaborative thoughts create.
I did ponder the word 'ideas' in the last line. Depending on which syllable counter one uses the word is with either 2 or 3 syllables. You may want to make a mention of 2 syllables in your end notes to be clear.
Best of luck in the competition. ~DD
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Thanks for taking the time to review, and the five stars.
I will make the correction.
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Once again I say thanks but I will keep what I have, meaning I used "will continue" for future because that was in my mind.
Like I said thanks for reviewing.
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No probs. It was just a suggestion. Happy to review and help any time. ~DD :-)
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
This is a well done Haiku, my friend, new ideas will certainly come with brainstorming:) Just thought I'd let you know, Haiku doesn't need capitalization, nor punctuation, you can write it like this if you like:
like the olden days-
brainstorming will continue
to bring new ideas
it's just a thought, lol Well done, my friend. ~Kerry
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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This is a well done Haiku, my friend, new ideas will certainly come with brainstorming:) Just thought I'd let you know, Haiku doesn't need capitalization, nor punctuation, you can write it like this if you like:
like the olden days-
brainstorming will continue
to bring new ideas
it's just a thought, lol Well done, my friend. ~Kerry
Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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Thanks for taking the time to review and the five stars you gave me in spite of how you felt. Thank you ever so much.
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You're very welcome:)
Comment from Lakieshae
Nice Haiku, very meaningful words... And yes New ideas will always come, today and tomorrow... I love talking to elders thought cause they always have the wises tales.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2018
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Nice Haiku, very meaningful words... And yes New ideas will always come, today and tomorrow... I love talking to elders thought cause they always have the wises tales.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2018
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Thanks for reviewing my haiku and giving me five stars.
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your're more than welcome... deserved them
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The work reminisces how the age old practice of brainstorming shall perpetually constitute a function of new ideas.
The work earns its texture through the use of simile and metaphor.
Excellent work! Keep the flag flying!
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2018
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The work reminisces how the age old practice of brainstorming shall perpetually constitute a function of new ideas.
The work earns its texture through the use of simile and metaphor.
Excellent work! Keep the flag flying!
Comment Written 06-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2018
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Thanks for reviewing my haiku and giving me five stars.
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Remain Blessed!
Comment from Sherman541
Great Picture to go with the Innovation! Very nicely written. Choice words really nice job of creating a Haiku. Good Luck and Best Wishes in the Contest! Sherman541
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2018
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Great Picture to go with the Innovation! Very nicely written. Choice words really nice job of creating a Haiku. Good Luck and Best Wishes in the Contest! Sherman541
Comment Written 06-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2018
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Thanks for reviewing my haiku and giving me five stars.
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you are welcome :)
Comment from sunnilicious
That picture reminds me of the steampunk genre. Keep the old and just continue to modernize it. Manufacturing doesn't have to end, it just has to change. Ideas can be great. Nice presentation. Great work. Good luck :)
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
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That picture reminds me of the steampunk genre. Keep the old and just continue to modernize it. Manufacturing doesn't have to end, it just has to change. Ideas can be great. Nice presentation. Great work. Good luck :)
Comment Written 30-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
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Thank you for taking the time to review my haiku and the five stars. I agree with what you said about manufacturing.
