Final Chapter
Changes6 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
HI Carolyn, where there is true love sweet girl...nothing stands in it's way...I saw that with my father...my mother had a stroke...her face changed...and she grew old...wrinkles in every bend....he never saw her different from the first day he met her...she was always beautiful to him...in there actions and there features... they still loved...I love your poem...and the picture is so perfect...very nicely written my sweet friend...love you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2018
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HI Carolyn, where there is true love sweet girl...nothing stands in it's way...I saw that with my father...my mother had a stroke...her face changed...and she grew old...wrinkles in every bend....he never saw her different from the first day he met her...she was always beautiful to him...in there actions and there features... they still loved...I love your poem...and the picture is so perfect...very nicely written my sweet friend...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2018
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Thank you for your heartfelt review.
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your so welcome Carolyn...love xxoo
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem of an everlasting love now in the final chapter. The way we show our love may have changed over the years but the bond is still strong and hold us together.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
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A very well-written poem of an everlasting love now in the final chapter. The way we show our love may have changed over the years but the bond is still strong and hold us together.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from frogbook
Very sweet observations and sharing. Some people always hold a bit of mystery. Smooth flowing like conversation even without any rhyme. Great job.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
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Very sweet observations and sharing. Some people always hold a bit of mystery. Smooth flowing like conversation even without any rhyme. Great job.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We accept the good and the bad in a relationship and our loyalty to it continues, kind words written here and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
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We accept the good and the bad in a relationship and our loyalty to it continues, kind words written here and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 'Free Verse Poetry' writing prompt.
Good message, well said. A story well told in verse.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the 'Free Verse Poetry' writing prompt.
Good message, well said. A story well told in verse.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from patcelaw
Carolyn, this is a thought provoking poem. As I read it I was taken into my marriage and how our relationship changed as we became older, there was a comfort like a nice pair of warm slippers. We always settled our disagreements before going to sleep. I miss that man as he truly was the wind beneath my broken wings. Patricia
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
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Carolyn, this is a thought provoking poem. As I read it I was taken into my marriage and how our relationship changed as we became older, there was a comfort like a nice pair of warm slippers. We always settled our disagreements before going to sleep. I miss that man as he truly was the wind beneath my broken wings. Patricia
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
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Thank you for your special review.
