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Squabbles

5-7-5 humor

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Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the Humorous 5-7-5 writing prompt.
Well written, funny.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2018

Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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If I am reading this correctly this is a little naughty! I had to look up the word 'hatecha' not heard of that before but I think I understand the meaning now, a clever play on words here and good luck with the contest, you made me laugh, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2018