Comment from emptypage

Average

Misfortune--one word
I was going to document all your errors, but I can't take that much time. This mindless mumbo jumbo is proof that the women you hate (or your narrator) are far better than the narrator could hope to be.

I can't look at misogyny in silence any more.

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 Comment Written 02-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018

Firstly my dear you've been muted so don't try to reply secondly you don't seem to understand the meaning behind this and it's not a narrator narrating is my own personal experiences - people's names who were cruel and crude in my lifetime and this was not the second for rating you giving me too and also talked about ratings band there isn't one single problem with the writings of this or grammar issues it's been well-reviewed and got five and six star reviews and was put on the wall command page so I would suggest that you re align your thoughts and next time when you're reviewing people's works because there's are younger people on this site that doesn't and don't need your unappreciative reviews dr. Ricky 1024

Comment from LIJ Red

Excellent

All genders follow the same Bell curves, but the nasty ones are the easiest to get involved with. I saw some typos, I think, but between your unique style and poetic license, I'll hush...different. Darkly impressive.

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018

Thanks for not taking credit away for a couple hours one word I made up so course it'll be misspelled in the beginning title I was this was already an issue I had with another writer named empty page who seems to have scrambled eggs in her Kranium for brains thanks for your wonderful review dr. Ricky 1024

Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)

Excellent

This one confused me a little Ricky. Still I think I got the point. In loved the last piece about reflections in your mind. Excellent and beautiful wording there kindest regards Meia x

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018

And again

Comment from kiwigirl2821

Excellent

Well Ricky you had me thinking about this one and I wasn't thinking too happily. In fact I noticed that you tore a new one for women which in my humble opinion showed no respect whatsoever. Big humbug on this one for me! lol xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018

I carried a problem with the woman issue is right up to the last 2 that stole from me one was ex-girlfriend I was taking care of still stole from me and now there was just renting a room and didn't pay me much to the beginning with my mother whom I bought the house off of and gave her the proper amount of money which spent and blue all of my little brother then wanted me to refinance it again and then only make 7 payments and basically got me for over 18,000 when you go through experiences with people that you care about people you form a relationship with people you trust and that's how it comes out I'm not saying it puts a bitter taste in your mind but it makes you very very cautious and so that was more or less a warning I was putting out in that piece to watch out it doesn't just work with women it also works the other way around with men too but but its more common with the woman for some reason they feel that they need to be taken care of and they deserve all this and not even if you're not married just a thought and thanks for your rude happy New Year dr. Ricky 1024 5 humbug

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

Good theme about resolutions. I usually do not make any, I just try to set goals throughout the year. Your words make the reader think and writing is a great way to express our feelings.

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018

Thanks again my dear and have a happy and healthy New Year equal to reading your work

Comment from Chrissy710

Excellent

Well Ricky You sure have given us a lot to think about and yes why not gather all the faults, addictions and miseries and just burn them I like this idea You write with such passion and I find no fault and it is refreshing to just read without picking the prose to pieces other than literery snobbery.
keep on writing Ricky I will read Have a Great 2108
Cheers Christine

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018

Thanks my darling and thanks for stopping by the house of suffering learn more what that means continue to follow me throughout the year and then you will know why I am known as the preacher of acquire FanStory and Mister Amazing...
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

'dreaded pool of regrets'

that line caught me and filled my mind with memories of things I thought long forgotten. Very well done dear friend as we move on

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018

Yes Barb we move on but there's anybody here on this site wish to hear what we have to say since we promote grief and pain but grief and pain are a poet and a good poet knows how to go deep inside and bring back those hard memories and turn them into a beautiful listing of words called poetry happy New Year dr. Ricky 1024

Comment from robyn corum

Good

Ricky,

I've noticed that you've been extra active lately -- writing AND reviewing. Very cool. Good for you!

This piece was unusual- which is normal for you, I think. Haha!!

I really enjoyed the first part - all the way down to 'murdering'. Then it started to get a little garbled and confused.

Thank you!

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018

You're welcome dr. Ricky 24 and happy New Year

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

A good, realistic poem with real meaning. The photo is a good fit and matches your message. I especially liked the verses about piling all of our problems and addictions together and burning for this year's resolutions. Good job. Regards. Hope you are enjoying a wonderful New Year's Day!

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018

Thanks for this.
Dr Ricky 1024.

Comment from Asem.inspirations

Excellent

Good morning, Ricky: My friend, you are hilarious. It seems like some one had pissed you off this morning, huh? I must give it to you though because you are painfully honest and honesty is the best way to go all the time so I can truly appreciate your honesty. My goodness though you went off on the women. hahahahahahaha...

Anyway, definitely weight loss for me but not as a resolution just as an everyday reality. Women seem to put on weight faster than men and we have a harder time trying to lose it and keep it off but I must keep myself lovely for my hubby so I agree with you on the weight loss. Great job on this first post of the day. This is the first one that I read anyway. Much love...

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018

I missed here we've only had a short relationship but I already feel as if we met someplace somewheres before many many many moons ago for apps but anyway there's not too many not only intellectually intelligent women that right on this site but also graciously beautiful and religious so that's what attracts me about you and actually my biggest fault was women really isn't there looks order habits too slow to speak its the ones that can't be trusted a loyal woman is is like a loyal pet expect nothing and in return just gives love something to think about maybe right about as this year progresses of the differences between Mankind and animal kind and how much more precious the animal kind treat the human kind and and how hardly vicious we are in return to these beautiful creatures that God put on this Earth just the / wag their tails and smile at us and give us a little love kiss on the face when my kittens are my cats give me a love nip on the face I know I'm truly blessed dr. Ricky 1024