Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)

Excellent

"Cry out Lord for Me for I so, so, miss my family"
"They wonder why and now all they do is cry?"
"There is no reason Why?"
As always Ricky wonderful work but so sad. I feel for you really I do kindest regards and well done Meia xx

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018

I'm here I am so glad you enjoyed these four they are all precious pieces I've accumulated in my sorry mine then place them out for public view in process total between the floor of probably about 45 minutes or less some people read one of my work since it would take them days to create something like that and takes me minutes go figure happy New Year keep warm dr. Ricky 1024

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

This is a great poem. You have a strong steady beat with a positive message. I like the line where you ask God where the joy is? Excellent use of words and a poem to make the reader think.

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018

Or just my dear laying continue to visit the house of suffering dr. Ricky 1024

Comment from kiwigirl2821

Excellent

You say in your author notes that you are "learning to write". Well mate, I think you have arrived in that direction as this is a powerfully written expression of your continued love for a son lost to you tragically. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018

Thanks for this kiwi girl and Jason and myself really appreciate this doctor Ricky 1024

reply by kiwigirl2821 on 01-Jan-2018

so so welcome ... Happy New Year! xx Kiwi

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very sad poem, as I always get sad when I read your work about your son and wife. You used very interesting and heartfelt words. May God bless you this New Year with new hope and great love! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018

Thanks for this Charlie and Jason and myself really appreciate this talk to Ricky 1024

Comment from Rasmine

Excellent

Good poem, Ricky. You do have your own style of writing, keep it up and don't stop learning and growing.
I found a typo:
"And, people are dieing (dying)...
"Where for Arth (Art) Thy Joy, God?"
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Happy New Year.

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018

Thanks for this rash mine and I made those two Corrections and Jason and I appreciate this doctor Ricky 1024

Comment from Ken the Carpenter

Exceptional

thank you for sharing, i can't imagine the strength it takes to continue, but life can not die it also continues, there is only perfection regardless of our perception and love does conquer all as all reconnects, the physical is the illusion.

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018

Thanks can you honor me and my dead son Jason with this beautiful and precious six star review dr. Ricky 1024

Comment from apky

Excellent

Every time I read about your sad but wonderful tributes to the loved ones whom you have lost, I feel with you, Ricky. I know this might sound ridiculous but I really do mean it. We've all had some really deep loss or other that makes us relate to that sensation, especially one's child. It's children who are supposed "to bury" their parents, not pareents their children.

Praying for you and I hope that the Lord you so firmly believe in with Bless, Keep and Reward you with Love during all of this New Year 2018.

Blessings,
Apky

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018

Thank you so much my dear only you can truly understand me it seems but how come you're still not divorced yet soon as that happens give me a call I'll come all the way to Siberia where my Eagles warm and comfy NFL coat and whisk you off your feet doctor Ricky 1024

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I am truly sorry about your tragic loss Ricky, here in England they are going to let all organs be donated and you have to make a specific declaration to stop it. I think it is a wise step to save lives. You may want to put the spell check through your work, 'exaltation' for instance, happy new year to you Ricky, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018

Thanks again Dolly and exaltation excitation I guess I made my own new word excitation but I meant same thing for talk to Ricky 1024