One Day...
Tribute to a dear friend..13 total reviews
Comment from Ellie707
A touching photo and poem.
Strong verbs create a stronger image of your loss.
There is nothing that can be added or taken away that will improve the poem!
I feel your pain in every line.
Fantastic job!
Ellie
P.S. Sorry for your loss.
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
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A touching photo and poem.
Strong verbs create a stronger image of your loss.
There is nothing that can be added or taken away that will improve the poem!
I feel your pain in every line.
Fantastic job!
Ellie
P.S. Sorry for your loss.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
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Thank you Ellie, for this very kind review and for the sentiments. I do appreciate it.
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i admire your determination to face the grief and loss.
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You were able to express your emotions which is a good thing,
Comment from DR DIP
If ever there could be the perfect memorial poem this definitely wins hands down.
This is so sublimely written in the most beautiful words I sincerely had a tear in my eye Thank you Susan for posting such a wonderful memory poem for your dear friend
and while I am here my dearest poet friend may I wish you a very happy new year's eve where you are and a wonderfully happy and prosperous new year.
I so wish I had a 6 left I have already gave them out ! bugger
xxxdip
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reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
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If ever there could be the perfect memorial poem this definitely wins hands down.
This is so sublimely written in the most beautiful words I sincerely had a tear in my eye Thank you Susan for posting such a wonderful memory poem for your dear friend
and while I am here my dearest poet friend may I wish you a very happy new year's eve where you are and a wonderfully happy and prosperous new year.
I so wish I had a 6 left I have already gave them out ! bugger
xxxdip
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Comment Written 31-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
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Dear Dip, this day couldn't be anymore difficult. It's taken me months to be able to write about my friend....Thank you for such kind words and sentiments. You are quite special to me. 6 stars are always nice, BUT you my friend and your wonderful reviews are truly golden.
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xxxx
Comment from justjo66
Death leaves such a vacuum. I can feel your sorrow in your words. I am sorry for your loss. Being able to write your feelings is the beginning of healing.
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reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
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Death leaves such a vacuum. I can feel your sorrow in your words. I am sorry for your loss. Being able to write your feelings is the beginning of healing.
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Comment Written 31-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
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Thank you for the kind review. I appreciate your thoughts and sentiments.
