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Showgirls of Spring

Short, Colorful Poem about Spring

4 total reviews 
Comment from Sharon Meda
Excellent
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This is a good entry for the 'Short and Colorful' writing prompt.
Well written, very colorful.
And the picture is beautiful.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
    Thank you!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

I adore the words here in your sweet and light-hearted poem filled with colourful and frilly spring flowers, a joy to read, happy new year, best wishes, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
    Thank you for dropping by to read and review. Just a poem of wishful thinking as we deal with subzero temps here in New England!
Comment from RodG
Excellent
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A pleasant diversion from what we're seeing where I live. Good personification of these crocus plants in their colorful showgirl ensemble. You also use alliteration very well to give poem a light-hearted tone.

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
    Thank you for dropping by to read and review. Just a poem of wishful thinking as we deal with subzero temps here in New England!
Comment from Pam (respa)
Excellent
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-Lovely image and presentation.
-Good choice of colors, excellent
imagery, and alliteration.
-Your descriptions are very vivid,
and paint a good word picture.
-Your last line is like a satori.
-A very good entry; good luck,
and the best of 2018, too!


 Comment Written 31-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
    Thank you for dropping by to read and review. Just a poem of wishful thinking as we deal with subzero temps here in New England!
reply by Pam (respa) on 01-Jan-2018
    You are quite welcome. I think most of the country is unusually cold, with some worse than others.