Showgirls of Spring
Short, Colorful Poem about Spring4 total reviews
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a good entry for the 'Short and Colorful' writing prompt.
Well written, very colorful.
And the picture is beautiful.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
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This is a good entry for the 'Short and Colorful' writing prompt.
Well written, very colorful.
And the picture is beautiful.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 31-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
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Thank you!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I adore the words here in your sweet and light-hearted poem filled with colourful and frilly spring flowers, a joy to read, happy new year, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
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I adore the words here in your sweet and light-hearted poem filled with colourful and frilly spring flowers, a joy to read, happy new year, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 31-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
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Thank you for dropping by to read and review. Just a poem of wishful thinking as we deal with subzero temps here in New England!
Comment from RodG
A pleasant diversion from what we're seeing where I live. Good personification of these crocus plants in their colorful showgirl ensemble. You also use alliteration very well to give poem a light-hearted tone.
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
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A pleasant diversion from what we're seeing where I live. Good personification of these crocus plants in their colorful showgirl ensemble. You also use alliteration very well to give poem a light-hearted tone.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
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Thank you for dropping by to read and review. Just a poem of wishful thinking as we deal with subzero temps here in New England!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Lovely image and presentation.
-Good choice of colors, excellent
imagery, and alliteration.
-Your descriptions are very vivid,
and paint a good word picture.
-Your last line is like a satori.
-A very good entry; good luck,
and the best of 2018, too!
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
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-Lovely image and presentation.
-Good choice of colors, excellent
imagery, and alliteration.
-Your descriptions are very vivid,
and paint a good word picture.
-Your last line is like a satori.
-A very good entry; good luck,
and the best of 2018, too!
Comment Written 31-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
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Thank you for dropping by to read and review. Just a poem of wishful thinking as we deal with subzero temps here in New England!
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You are quite welcome. I think most of the country is unusually cold, with some worse than others.
