A Sign of the Times
Stores make holidays overlap with marketing.47 total reviews
Comment from nbonner
I myself was relieved when Christmas was over. My kids are older so it's more stressful to buy gifts because they're so picky. It's always one holiday after another and it seems like we never get a break! Nicely written. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest. NB
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
I myself was relieved when Christmas was over. My kids are older so it's more stressful to buy gifts because they're so picky. It's always one holiday after another and it seems like we never get a break! Nicely written. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest. NB
Comment Written 31-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
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Thank you for reading and the nice comments on this entry for the contest. It came from my heart.
Happy New Year to you and yours!
Mystery Writer
Comment from kiwigirl2821
I'm with you, just a few minutes please to simply wander and enjoy the sights and colors of Christmas. Valentine's Day? oh my! Know your pain! xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
I'm with you, just a few minutes please to simply wander and enjoy the sights and colors of Christmas. Valentine's Day? oh my! Know your pain! xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 31-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
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Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Glad you liked it and could relate.
Happy New Year!
Brigitte
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi anon - a very good idea you came up with for the contest entry, and it could even be true. Christmas in shops' displays started over here about September/October, so Valentine's Day in December sounds about right. It's ridiculous. Well written poem in mixed rhyme and meter and a good read. Good luck in the contest and Happy New Year - Dorothy x
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
Hi anon - a very good idea you came up with for the contest entry, and it could even be true. Christmas in shops' displays started over here about September/October, so Valentine's Day in December sounds about right. It's ridiculous. Well written poem in mixed rhyme and meter and a good read. Good luck in the contest and Happy New Year - Dorothy x
Comment Written 31-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
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Thank you so very much.
Thank you for the read and review.
Happy New Year!
Brigitte
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
What about the January sales? That will be the next stressful advertising campaign! But I am with you in your thinking, although I think I escaped the hype by being on holiday this year, fine words here to describe the release that Christmas is over, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
What about the January sales? That will be the next stressful advertising campaign! But I am with you in your thinking, although I think I escaped the hype by being on holiday this year, fine words here to describe the release that Christmas is over, love Dolly x
Comment Written 31-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
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Thank you for the read and supportive comments.
Happy New Year!
Brigitte
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi MOI agree totolly next week we will have Easter Eggs and Hot cross buns for sale I remember when Christmas used to be 2 weeks before Xmas Day and the excitment and build up was so worth it But now everything is buybuy buy well before an event Loved your poem and I would have walked out too
Good luck in the contest Cheers Christine
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
Hi MOI agree totolly next week we will have Easter Eggs and Hot cross buns for sale I remember when Christmas used to be 2 weeks before Xmas Day and the excitment and build up was so worth it But now everything is buybuy buy well before an event Loved your poem and I would have walked out too
Good luck in the contest Cheers Christine
Comment Written 31-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
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Thank you so much for reading. I am happy that you could relate to my from the heart poem.
Happy New Year!
Brigitte
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, an absolutely perfect narration of the times in which we live - I was a teen in the wonderful 50's, and things were different then. We enjoyed each season and holiday to its fullest. I was also shocked when I noted Valentine decorations, cards and gifts in the stores today. I thought to myself and almost said out loud - it isn't even Hew Year's day yet! Ar you kidding - this truly is commercialism at its worst! Your poem's stunning and easy rhyming verse is both a delight and a haunting reminder of days past - much luck in the contest...
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
In my opinion, an absolutely perfect narration of the times in which we live - I was a teen in the wonderful 50's, and things were different then. We enjoyed each season and holiday to its fullest. I was also shocked when I noted Valentine decorations, cards and gifts in the stores today. I thought to myself and almost said out loud - it isn't even Hew Year's day yet! Ar you kidding - this truly is commercialism at its worst! Your poem's stunning and easy rhyming verse is both a delight and a haunting reminder of days past - much luck in the contest...
Comment Written 31-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
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I am honored by this review because it came from one of the best writers on FS. Thank you.
Happy New Year!
Mystery Writer
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You are indeed very welcome, Mystery Writer - an extremely relevant and timely write. Thank you for sharing. I find your compliment amazing, and I am honored that you would consider me one of the "best writers" here. I am both humbled and thrilled - you have made my year! What an incredible start for 2018! Thank you so much for your extraordinary words. I wish you a Happy, Healthy, Prosperous and Productive New Year to you and yours as well...Eve
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My pleasure!
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Yes, but I am still in awe - thank you again for your inspiration...Eve
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Thank you for your beautiful writing which you share.
Brigitte
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Thank you for providing your name, Brigitte - I am even more honored, if that is possible, because I consider you a rare and gifted writer - thank you so much for your priceless praise...Eve
Comment from DR DIP
I really liked this because I agree with your sentiments. Another year over, another year to reflect.
Christmas can be such a rushing, stressful time if you let it. Its now time to go into 2018 smelling the roses
Thanks for sharing
dip
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
I really liked this because I agree with your sentiments. Another year over, another year to reflect.
Christmas can be such a rushing, stressful time if you let it. Its now time to go into 2018 smelling the roses
Thanks for sharing
dip
Comment Written 31-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
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I am honored by your kind review. When a reader can relate, I am elated.
Happy New Year!
Brigitte
Comment from MelB
A well written poem about the advertisements and displays the stores rush into and make us stressed out. The Christmas stuff goes out earlier every year. Not surprised the Valentines stuff is out already.
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
A well written poem about the advertisements and displays the stores rush into and make us stressed out. The Christmas stuff goes out earlier every year. Not surprised the Valentines stuff is out already.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
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Thank you for the read and comments. When a reader can relate to my work, I am elated.
Happy New Year!
Mystery Writer
Comment from sherrygreywolf
You captured my feelings about the premature merchandising by the stores perfectly. The poem is well written and I saw no errors that need correction.
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
You captured my feelings about the premature merchandising by the stores perfectly. The poem is well written and I saw no errors that need correction.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
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Thank you for the read and the supportive comments. When the reader can relate, I feel elated.
Happy New Year!
Mystery Writer
Comment from oliver818
What a crazy shop. You're just in lucky they hadn't jumped so far ahead that they were advertising next year's Christmas already. Thanks for sharing and have a really great day
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
What a crazy shop. You're just in lucky they hadn't jumped so far ahead that they were advertising next year's Christmas already. Thanks for sharing and have a really great day
Comment Written 30-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
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Thank you for the read and comments.
Happy New Year!
Mystery Writer