Me Poet? Ha-ha
three line poem11 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This three-line poem, Me Poet? Ha Ha,, uses seventeen syllables in the required stanza setup and reminds us that verse is an outlet art that needs to be dabbled with by all who need their souls to be lightened. I think for this challenge, since a 5-7-5 format is not a requirement, you could move the 'fetch' instruction to begin on the third line. Happy day.
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
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This three-line poem, Me Poet? Ha Ha,, uses seventeen syllables in the required stanza setup and reminds us that verse is an outlet art that needs to be dabbled with by all who need their souls to be lightened. I think for this challenge, since a 5-7-5 format is not a requirement, you could move the 'fetch' instruction to begin on the third line. Happy day.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
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Hello Bill, I am honored by your visit my friend; thank you very much for your time and the constructive review. Happy New Year!
Comment from Ricky1024
This was presented for the three-line from contest Crump entry piece well-written rich and seem as well as imagery flowed well Redbubble no grammar issue so to speak adjective an object account since we're both excellent script and measures firmly in place good luck in the contest dr. Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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This was presented for the three-line from contest Crump entry piece well-written rich and seem as well as imagery flowed well Redbubble no grammar issue so to speak adjective an object account since we're both excellent script and measures firmly in place good luck in the contest dr. Ricky 1024
Comment Written 30-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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Thank you Ricky, appreciate the time and the encouraging review.
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You have a wonderful and Happy New Year.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later
Comment from Joan E.
I am delighted you are ending the year with a high level of inspiration. Thank you for motivating others with your words of encouragement. Your addition of alliteration to this tiny form and the thoughtful picture intensifies your message. Best wishes in the contest and enjoy the holiday weekend- Joan
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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I am delighted you are ending the year with a high level of inspiration. Thank you for motivating others with your words of encouragement. Your addition of alliteration to this tiny form and the thoughtful picture intensifies your message. Best wishes in the contest and enjoy the holiday weekend- Joan
Comment Written 30-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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My friend, I thank you for stopping by and I am pleased that you like the write. Happy holidays.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written three line poem. We cannot believe we have the gift to write poetry unless we try. Sometimes we can surprise ourselves in what we can come up with.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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A very well-written three line poem. We cannot believe we have the gift to write poetry unless we try. Sometimes we can surprise ourselves in what we can come up with.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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Hello Sandra, i appreciate your visit and am glad that you like the poem, thank you very much; happy New Year.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks without poetry there is no life, clearly without poetry is a flight-fetch out the poet in man; I liked the viewpoint about role of poetry in life. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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This speaks without poetry there is no life, clearly without poetry is a flight-fetch out the poet in man; I liked the viewpoint about role of poetry in life. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 30-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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Hello my friend, appreciate your visit and the insights, thank you very much.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Poets always wear their hearts on their sleeves, so it's not too difficult to spot them.
They'll be the one's you see out and about with a mischievous sparkle in their eyes and an impish grin.
Do not fear them for they're relatively harmless.
Unless you happen to run into one like me.
Good three line poem, Ameen786.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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Poets always wear their hearts on their sleeves, so it's not too difficult to spot them.
They'll be the one's you see out and about with a mischievous sparkle in their eyes and an impish grin.
Do not fear them for they're relatively harmless.
Unless you happen to run into one like me.
Good three line poem, Ameen786.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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Hello Dean, thank you my friend, I appreciate your visit and the insights. Happy New Year.
Comment from oliver818
Nice poem. I like the message, it's a good one. And the imagery is quite beautiful and powerful. It seems to be a very good entry for this competition. Thanks for sharing and have a great day
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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Nice poem. I like the message, it's a good one. And the imagery is quite beautiful and powerful. It seems to be a very good entry for this competition. Thanks for sharing and have a great day
Comment Written 30-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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Hello Oliver, glad you stopped by and that you like the poem, thank you very much and a very happy New Year to you.
Comment from rama devi
Good short poem about poets and poetry. I like the picture choice, adding further dimension, subtly, to the words. I love the consonance of F and L and S. Good flow. My only suggestion is to avoid the filler words in the closing lines...perhaps also drop the you and make it more like a haiku satori. Example idea:
Life sans poetry
is a lifeless flight-fetch out
the inner poet
Good luck in the contest.
Warmly, rd
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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Good short poem about poets and poetry. I like the picture choice, adding further dimension, subtly, to the words. I love the consonance of F and L and S. Good flow. My only suggestion is to avoid the filler words in the closing lines...perhaps also drop the you and make it more like a haiku satori. Example idea:
Life sans poetry
is a lifeless flight-fetch out
the inner poet
Good luck in the contest.
Warmly, rd
Comment Written 30-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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Namaskar Deviji, no words to thank you but to say that I am grateful as always; thank you for the wonderful suggestion-done.
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:-)))))))) Namaste!
Comment from Sis Cat
This is a fine three line poem. I cannot imagine life without it. I live on poetry. I love your word choice and how it emphasized the importance of poetry.
In terms of flow, I feel your poem would flow better and smoother if your words were written this way:
Life sans poetry
is a lifeless flight--
fetch out the poet in you.
The hyphen in the middle of the phrase flight-fetch catches in my throat. You can also dispense with the exclamation mark and let your words and message alone do the shouting without prompting the reader.
This is a fine, imaginative poem nonetheless. I wish you success in the contest with this fine entry. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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This is a fine three line poem. I cannot imagine life without it. I live on poetry. I love your word choice and how it emphasized the importance of poetry.
In terms of flow, I feel your poem would flow better and smoother if your words were written this way:
Life sans poetry
is a lifeless flight--
fetch out the poet in you.
The hyphen in the middle of the phrase flight-fetch catches in my throat. You can also dispense with the exclamation mark and let your words and message alone do the shouting without prompting the reader.
This is a fine, imaginative poem nonetheless. I wish you success in the contest with this fine entry. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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Hello Andre, my friend, I appreciate your visit and the constructive review; glad you like the write, I am highly encouraged, thank you.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Three Line Poem writing prompt.
A good message in a few words.
I like the picture as well.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
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reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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I think this is a good entry for the Three Line Poem writing prompt.
A good message in a few words.
I like the picture as well.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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Hello Sharon, I appreciate your time and the wonderful review, thank you very much and a very Happy New Year to you.
