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Church Choir Brawl

Humor .... Fictional...

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Comment from Joy Graham
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Hahahaha! I have heard this told in joke form, but never in poetry style. The one I heard was told with an Italian accent. It's always funny every time I hear it. it never gets old. Well done on winning the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2018


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Comment from emptypage
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Funny poem with a good, solid story. I hope it is fictional!

I've seen women who'd react the same, in church or in a brothel (though I guess in a brothel they wouldn't mind so much as long as they were paid). I know men, too, who'd do as Deacon Fries. Why not help a girl out? This is why.

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2017


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    Thanks for the good review! Good works don?t always get rewarded.
Comment from rhonnie69
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Season's Greetings to you, my friend: Welcome to the club. I am currently on a church choir.
I am at home with your realistic post. We've named ourselves, "One Accord." We all love each other. We all work diligently together. I've been given the, "oh my." But so far, no member has given me a, "black eye." Because they all like me. Thank God.Your post is going to help me become a better participant. Why? Because until I read your post, I've been asking myself, "Is it just us?" Thank you for the tip. I can use it; and I will. And become a better go-getter. Thanks again. rhonnie69.

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2017


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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written funny poem. We had a similar folklore story in Afrikaans about the preacher's wife and the choir boy who was standing right behind her and the dress that fits too tight.

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2017


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Comment from Dean Kuch
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Well, this poetic tale just goes to prove one thing.
Sometimes, when you try to do a good deed, you make an ass of yourself. And once you've made an ass of yourself, it will leave you feeling blue.
This was a perfect, well orchestrated entry for this particular contest. While it is very funny you just can't help feel sorry for Deacon Fries.
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 Comment Written 30-Dec-2017


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    You're welcome so much.
Comment from Ricky1024
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Church choir bras and not funny writing prompt which in thing resolved and reread well flowed well with no grammar issue so to speak ejective an object the contents for excellence would you measure shortening in place good luck in the contest dr. Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2017


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Comment from Sharon Meda
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I think this is a good entry for the 'Not Funny, But Funny' writing prompt.
Well done telling your funny story.
This could easily happen just so.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2017


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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks about noisy quarrel and an honest feeling of inappropriate touch at the Church Choir, an experience nicely shared; some people are shameless; I liked. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2017


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Comment from Ellie707
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The picture is worth a thousand words. One can just imagine Sister Sue and Deacon Fries (appropriate names).

Silly but funny! I like the humor of this poem and can picture it happening. Good job of rhyming which is not always easy.

Good job!

Ellie

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2017


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Comment from patcelaw
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It is always unwise for a gent to pull on the hem of a lady no matter where it is stuck or the what it is stuck. There are good reasons for the purple eyes I would say. Blessings for the new year, Patricia

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 Comment Written 29-Dec-2017


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