Procrastination
My inner dialogue this time of year45 total reviews
Comment from Ricky1024
This is a dialogue probe writing prompt origin seem as well as imagery flowed well read well and there was no grammar issues detective an object the contents were excellent skip to measure firmly in place good luck in the contest
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This is a dialogue probe writing prompt origin seem as well as imagery flowed well read well and there was no grammar issues detective an object the contents were excellent skip to measure firmly in place good luck in the contest
Comment Written 28-Dec-2017
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Thanks, Ricky. I hope to read more of your writing sometime soon. Hope you are doing well.
Comment from Abigail Underhill
I had this exact conversation with my sister yesterday! I am glad to know that another person does the same thing that I do. I loved the way that you conveyed procrastination.
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I had this exact conversation with my sister yesterday! I am glad to know that another person does the same thing that I do. I loved the way that you conveyed procrastination.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2017
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Thanks for reading and commenting. I think we all procrastinate at some time in our life.
Comment from royowen
Ah...but tomorrow never comes. The epitome of procrastination. Well done, I like the theme, simple but clever at the same time. A lot of people can relate to this thematic principle. Great entry in this dialogue only contest. Good characters, simple but affective plot, and a theme all of us understand. Well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
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Ah...but tomorrow never comes. The epitome of procrastination. Well done, I like the theme, simple but clever at the same time. A lot of people can relate to this thematic principle. Great entry in this dialogue only contest. Good characters, simple but affective plot, and a theme all of us understand. Well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 28-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2017
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Thank you for reading and commenting. Glad you enjoyed the story.
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Well done
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
Sounds more like avoidance rather than procrastination to me...lol
Good back and forth in the dialogue here. Very clear and easy to follow.
best of luck to you.
GMG
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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2017
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Hi there,
Sounds more like avoidance rather than procrastination to me...lol
Good back and forth in the dialogue here. Very clear and easy to follow.
best of luck to you.
GMG
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Comment Written 28-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2017
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Thanks for reading and commenting. Yep, it could be avoidance. LOL
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a good entry for the Dialogue Only writing prompt.
It's not always easy to tell a story with Dialogue only.
Well written, thank you for sharing.
Good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
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This is a good entry for the Dialogue Only writing prompt.
It's not always easy to tell a story with Dialogue only.
Well written, thank you for sharing.
Good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
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Comment Written 28-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2017
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Thnks for reading and commenting.
