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A Message from Your Father

Tanka poem 5-7-5-7-7

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Comment from zekeziemann
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Your little poem reminded me of a lovely saying that I have spoken to my grown daughter: A son is a son until he takes a wife. A daughter is a daughter all of her life. Well done.

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2017
    Thank you so much. I love your little saying.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2017
    Thank you so much. I love your little saying.
Comment from Wetbelly01
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Nice poem... I wish I could walk with my father again...
It seems to me that your poem will do well in the contest...
I certainly have no problems with it....
Well Done as far as I'm concerned!!

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 Comment Written 27-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2017
    Thank you for the good review.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2017
    Thank you for the good review.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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This is a good entry for the 'Uplifting Poetry' writing prompt.
The beautiful artwork is a good match as well.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

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 Comment Written 27-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2017
    Thank you.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2017
    Thank you.