How Does God work
free verse contest entry29 total reviews
Comment from Liberty Justice
BEAUTIFUL, Terri! Your poem shows riveting spirituality and a peace of mind. It's theme states we should have faith in God, pray and wait for him to answer our prayers. Your poem is one of reverence, stability and hope. Check mine out, also. liberty justice
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2017
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BEAUTIFUL, Terri! Your poem shows riveting spirituality and a peace of mind. It's theme states we should have faith in God, pray and wait for him to answer our prayers. Your poem is one of reverence, stability and hope. Check mine out, also. liberty justice
Comment Written 26-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2017
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Thank you for the great review and very nice comments my friend. I just like to write what the Lord has done for me to encourage others and hopefully give them hope. I feel is others would do the same the world would be a better place to live. We would be uplifting our Lord instead of talking about negative or hateful things all the time. Just the way I see it. I appreciate you my friend. We get home on Thursday and I will check back in on your work again. I am on my sons lap top and it is not as easy for me to get around on as my desk top at home! Happy New Year! love, Teri
Comment from royowen
A great free verse poem Teri. No matter what we do or where go, God goes with us, and boy! Is that a comfort to know, He's always on our side, He loves and watches over us, beautifull saviour Teri, good girl, beautifully written, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2017
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A great free verse poem Teri. No matter what we do or where go, God goes with us, and boy! Is that a comfort to know, He's always on our side, He loves and watches over us, beautifull saviour Teri, good girl, beautifully written, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 26-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2017
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Thank you Roy for the great review and very nice comments. It makes so happy to see good reviews as I am sure the Lord sees them too and He is praised! Happy New Year! Teri
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My pleasure dear girl
Comment from zanya
I am truly in awe of such profound and meaningful Faith as evidenced in the words of this Free Verse poem - Line 4 is particularly striking 'He sometimes makes me wait for answers.....' a situation leading to 'helps me with trust and faith in him'...
How is such Faith fostered ?
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2017
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I am truly in awe of such profound and meaningful Faith as evidenced in the words of this Free Verse poem - Line 4 is particularly striking 'He sometimes makes me wait for answers.....' a situation leading to 'helps me with trust and faith in him'...
How is such Faith fostered ?
Comment Written 26-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2017
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Thank you Zanya for the great review and wonderful comments. We do serve an awesome God and I am so thankful for His love and protection and friendship! love, Teri
Comment from Heather Knight
This is a lovely poem, Teri. I like how you describe God as a friend who never lets you down.
I'm glad to see you so happy.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2017
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This is a lovely poem, Teri. I like how you describe God as a friend who never lets you down.
I'm glad to see you so happy.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2017
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Thank you Maria for the great review and very nice comment! Happy New Year my friend! love, Teri
Comment from MelB
Hi Teri, this is a lovely free verse poem and contest entry! I'm glad you had a wonderful time with your family and that you got a surprise from your sons.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2017
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Hi Teri, this is a lovely free verse poem and contest entry! I'm glad you had a wonderful time with your family and that you got a surprise from your sons.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2017
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Thank you Mel for the great review and very nice comments. I hope you are doing well and your father and family too! love, Teri
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You're welcome. It's been a rough week:(
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written free verse poem about how God does His work. It is never predictable how or when He will answer our prayers. But His timing is always perfect and the way He does it always is amazing.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2017
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A very well-written free verse poem about how God does His work. It is never predictable how or when He will answer our prayers. But His timing is always perfect and the way He does it always is amazing.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2017
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Thank you so much Sandra for the great review and very nice comments! God is full of new mercy each day! Happy New Year my friend! love, Teri
Comment from Dean Kuch
I'm tickled pink you know Him s well as you do, Teri.
Rest assured that despite the often morbid, eerie and creepy things I write, I know Him too. I also try to get others to know him as well.
I wouldn't have it any other way.
Happy New Year to you & yours,
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2017
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I'm tickled pink you know Him s well as you do, Teri.
Rest assured that despite the often morbid, eerie and creepy things I write, I know Him too. I also try to get others to know him as well.
I wouldn't have it any other way.
Happy New Year to you & yours,
Comment Written 26-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2017
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Thank you so much Dean for the great review and love art work my friend. I have no doubt that you know our Savior and Lord well. When I write I do it basically from me and about me. i try to encourage those they may not know Him at all or may need encouragement! That is all my friend! Happy New Year!
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Okay.
Comment from patcelaw
Teri, this is a beautifully worded free verse poem for the contest. I wish you the very best in the contest. Blessing for a great Happy New Year. May the wonder of God fill your heart all year long. Patricia
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2017
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Teri, this is a beautifully worded free verse poem for the contest. I wish you the very best in the contest. Blessing for a great Happy New Year. May the wonder of God fill your heart all year long. Patricia
Comment Written 26-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2017
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Thank you so much my friend for the great review and lovely six stars. I pray the same for you too my friend! love, Teri
Comment from Poetic Friend
Teri,
I wish I had a sixer for this outstanding write. I love the way you approach the friendship with God (like a honest friend, but with some supremacy).
This poem shines, but there are a few minor nits as
As I sit here and write this free verse poem[,] I am so excited!
I want to tell you of the best friend I have ever had or will have.
He is always on time, never late for anything.
He sometimes makes me wait for answers,
which helps me with trust and faith in [H]im.
His answers are always so much more than what I could ever hope for.
The way He answers is sometimes through the most unusual way to me.
He certainly knows how to get His point across to me.
Every day is perfect with Him leading my way by His holy spirit.
Every night I can rest in His precious love and feel safe and at peace.
Today I may not know what it brings for me,
but I know who is in charge!
Again, thank you for reminding us what a friend we have in God.
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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2017
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Teri,
I wish I had a sixer for this outstanding write. I love the way you approach the friendship with God (like a honest friend, but with some supremacy).
This poem shines, but there are a few minor nits as
As I sit here and write this free verse poem[,] I am so excited!
I want to tell you of the best friend I have ever had or will have.
He is always on time, never late for anything.
He sometimes makes me wait for answers,
which helps me with trust and faith in [H]im.
His answers are always so much more than what I could ever hope for.
The way He answers is sometimes through the most unusual way to me.
He certainly knows how to get His point across to me.
Every day is perfect with Him leading my way by His holy spirit.
Every night I can rest in His precious love and feel safe and at peace.
Today I may not know what it brings for me,
but I know who is in charge!
Again, thank you for reminding us what a friend we have in God.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2017
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Thank you so much for the great review and help too. It is easy for me to write about my Lord and about Greyson too! I hope you have a wonderfully blessed new Year my friend! love, Teri
