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Chiari Malformation

A very painful affliction

2 total reviews 
Comment from Razor D Belphe
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Sorry to hear that. Is this reserved as part of an autobiography? Otherwise, it doesn't seem to fit here. This site is for posting stories as far as I know.

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 25-Dec-2017
    This is a free verse poem for a contest entitled, My Body. Thanks for the read
reply by Razor D Belphe on 25-Dec-2017
    Ah, ok
Comment from Ricky1024
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This is a your body writing prompt which is first time I've seen this one it was very well written rich and seem as well as imagery red well flowed well no grammar issues objective as well as objective content were excellent and descriptive measures in place good luck with this in the contest talk to Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 25-Dec-2017
    Hey, thanks for the read and the encouraging critique.