Miss You, Dad.
A poem about my dad.21 total reviews
Comment from aryr
Such a wonderful tribute Maria to your father, I am sure he was able to watch over you as you grew and as your guardian he protected you. He may have been physically gone he always stayed with you. Well done.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2017
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Such a wonderful tribute Maria to your father, I am sure he was able to watch over you as you grew and as your guardian he protected you. He may have been physically gone he always stayed with you. Well done.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2017
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Thanks for reading, Aryr. Merry Christmas.
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You are most welcome Maria, Christmas greetings from us to you and yours.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Maria Jose Garcia
A very touching and heaer breaking poem to read about how you were daddy's little girl love how you talked about him
in your authors notes
Gert
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2017
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Hello Maria Jose Garcia
A very touching and heaer breaking poem to read about how you were daddy's little girl love how you talked about him
in your authors notes
Gert
Comment Written 23-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2017
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Thanks for reading, Gert.
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You are welcome
Gert
Comment from For better for verse
What a wonderful piece of writing in tribute to your dear dad, who was obviously a wonderful man. Your words were perfect and very moving if a little sad..
This was great and what a wonderful picture of you both together.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2017
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What a wonderful piece of writing in tribute to your dear dad, who was obviously a wonderful man. Your words were perfect and very moving if a little sad..
This was great and what a wonderful picture of you both together.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2017
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Thanks for your kind review.
Comment from DR DIP
In 1970 I was 16 but I still remember vividly Dad running me to soccer on the weekends and the beach and waterskiing behind the ski boat he made. He was small in stature but big in heart just like your dad Maria. Christmas time is a time to reflect as well on those loved ones we have lost too early.
dip
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2017
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In 1970 I was 16 but I still remember vividly Dad running me to soccer on the weekends and the beach and waterskiing behind the ski boat he made. He was small in stature but big in heart just like your dad Maria. Christmas time is a time to reflect as well on those loved ones we have lost too early.
dip
Comment Written 23-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2017
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Dads are such an important part of our life, aren't they?
Thanks for reading.
Merry Christmas.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
I would stare at the picture as I read picturing you with your dad as you spoke of him as a smile. Very well done and passionate
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2017
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I would stare at the picture as I read picturing you with your dad as you spoke of him as a smile. Very well done and passionate
Comment Written 23-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2017
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Thanks for your review, Barb. Merry Christmas.
Comment from royowen
Such a touching poem Maria. Psychologists say a girl Aquires her self worth from her father, equally a lack from the opposite circumstance. I can see the adoring look on your father's face in the photo, I adore my girls, they mean everything to me. Now they are wives and mums, successful, loving ones, and I am proud to think I've been part of that. I had occasion to spend a day with my six year old,, granddaughter, when she said "hold my hand Bapa" (Just like your photo) t felt ten feet tall. Bless you Maria, for reminding me how precious they are. Roy
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2017
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Such a touching poem Maria. Psychologists say a girl Aquires her self worth from her father, equally a lack from the opposite circumstance. I can see the adoring look on your father's face in the photo, I adore my girls, they mean everything to me. Now they are wives and mums, successful, loving ones, and I am proud to think I've been part of that. I had occasion to spend a day with my six year old,, granddaughter, when she said "hold my hand Bapa" (Just like your photo) t felt ten feet tall. Bless you Maria, for reminding me how precious they are. Roy
Comment Written 23-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2017
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Thanks for your touching review and generous rating.
Have a very merry Christmas.
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Well earned Maria
Comment from Sharon Haiste
Your poem is a lovely tribute to your Dad and the photo is beautiful.
Well done and thank you for sharing this with us.
Merry Christmas to you and yours.
Sharon
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2017
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Your poem is a lovely tribute to your Dad and the photo is beautiful.
Well done and thank you for sharing this with us.
Merry Christmas to you and yours.
Sharon
Comment Written 23-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2017
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Thanks for reading, Sharon.
Merry Christmas to you too.
Comment from brenda faye curtis
What a beautiful poem! It seems to capture the essence of this person, your father, which is, let's face it, a better description than any collection of dry facts could offer to the reader.
I do see one spelling error-in the seventh stanza, second line. You used the word "said", and I think you meant "say".
In all, a great poem, brilliantly emotional and descriptive.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2017
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What a beautiful poem! It seems to capture the essence of this person, your father, which is, let's face it, a better description than any collection of dry facts could offer to the reader.
I do see one spelling error-in the seventh stanza, second line. You used the word "said", and I think you meant "say".
In all, a great poem, brilliantly emotional and descriptive.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2017
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Thanks for reading and for noticing the typo, Brenda.
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You're welcome.
Comment from patcelaw
Maria, This is a wonderful tribute to your father. You were among the lucky girls in this world who had such a dear fathers. Sadly that was not to be in my case. Patricia
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2017
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Maria, This is a wonderful tribute to your father. You were among the lucky girls in this world who had such a dear fathers. Sadly that was not to be in my case. Patricia
Comment Written 23-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2017
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Thanks for reading, Patricia.
Merry Christmas.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks a daughter remembers her darling, best dad the best man ever, he left so early so silently all on a sudden, he is unforgettable, ever; I like. DR ALCREATOR
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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2017
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This speaks a daughter remembers her darling, best dad the best man ever, he left so early so silently all on a sudden, he is unforgettable, ever; I like. DR ALCREATOR
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2017
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Thanks for reading my poem.
